I have to say this has been some of the most offputting Jarring decision making that I have ever seen out of any characters ever. It feels like I read something written by a 14-year-old girl who wanted to write romance and hired an editor to actually make it readable.

Some of the interactions are believable near the beginning, but as I read everything seemed more and more rushed. It's at the point now where every fucking time I read about Vader or Padme I just want to stop reading. They don't feel like people anymore. It feels like both of them randomly have their brains switched with baked potatoes whenever there is something that needs to happen for plot convenience.

It's utterly fucking maddening.
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I can try to give some constructive criticism here, but I don't think it will help any. The only thing I'd even be able to suggest is to try and make the decision making of your characters not seem...bipolar? I think that's the best way to describe it.

Overall, I'm at an impasse for this story. I like the basic concept, but it just feels kinda meh now with all of that crap. I really don't think I can get any more enjoyment out of it without just suspending my belief for 90% of this story's entire plot.

WHEEZE IM WEAK AAAAAAAA this is good but jesus I dont know if my innocent mind could take it

Thank you for this wonderful story! It was filled with emotions, drama and action. I loved your OC! Was Cory and other clones invited to Anakin&Padme wedding? :-)

I really love this story it is amazing!

Great chapter

Interesting chapter and plot and idea

Ah, Stockholm Syndrome...

so good ;-;

Love it!

Dear Leaves:

Ah, so this is what the title means, then? The Emperor may be a tyrant, but Love is a greater one, and poor Vader doesn't stand a chance? I like it.

(One thing about that title, though: it should be "Tyrannos", not "Turannos". By convention, when you Romanize a Greek word, a lone upsilon is indicated by a Y; a U indicates the diphthong "ου". Thus, for instance, "Θουκυδίδης" becomes "Thucydides", not "Thoucudides".)

Sincerely,
Qoheleth

I wan yo say, I really really loved your story, so romantic and at the same time so Star Wars This is the second time I will read your story and I wish you had finished the second part. Greetings and keep in home jajaj bye from Chile

Hello,
I have read a lot of star wars fanfiction, and this one has been by far the best one. That means a lot coming from me; I do not please easy :). But thank you so much for giving us this story, and I sincerely hope that you continue Paterfamilias.

You are a fucking disgusting human being.

I... chickened out XD I'm sorry, I can't even...This is good XD I'm bad XD Gosh, I can't decide if I need this or not XD

Amazing story. Definitely the best non-crossover Star Wars I have read. I read it all today, and am going to read the sequel. If anyone dislikes this story, then I would assume they shouldn't be reading any SW fic because this is the cream of the crop.