The writing quality is good in terms of your spelling and grammar, but the following part of the Content Guidelines is broken for being a second person or you-based story:

Entries not allowed:
5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.

Please remove all elements related to the reader such as "(f/n)" and replace them with any canon character or original character. Switch to first person or third person point of view. You can always put it on another site where it is allowed like Archive Of Our Own.

Well done, please write more!

OH MY GOSH please please please write another 10 or 20 chapters on this fanfic. Or, better still, write a complete sequel. Bones is my absolute FAVOURITE character. And the interaction between the reader and the characters really makes you feel as though you are part of the story, and that's one of the best qualities an author can add to their stories. It engages the reader, brings them closer, sequesters them inside the tale as it washes over them then ends, leaving them wanting more, as is the case with your fantastic fanfic. Keep writing! ;)

Reader fics! I love these things! There really aren't enough of them. You do a good job of description and pacing. I hope you continue with the story.

I keep re-reading this! please update I'm dying to find out what happens this cant be the end!
You are an amazing writer please post chapter six

I swear I will riot if you don't continue this story! You're such an amazing writer, and this story is so amazing! You write Bones perfectly. I will pay you in friendship to continue this story!

Love this please update soon

Are you still planning on updating?
This is a really fantastic story, and you, my friend, are a VERY gifted writer.
Bones will forever be my favorite Star Trek character, and this is just amazing. :)
I really love this story, and appreciate you writing it! :D 3

This is great! You have to update sometime! Don't quit now, it's just getting good! The suspense is killing me! :D

Please!
Post chapter six! ;3;

It was really great.
I enjoyed reading each chapter!

You need to write a sixth chapter. Or the riots shall start! :D

This is an awesome story so far, :) I can't wait to read more.

I was pretty dang excited when I was scrolling down and I saw this had five chapters instead of only four. Thanks for updating, and awesome chapter! For sure worth the wait.

waaaaaah!? WHERES THE RESTTTT!?

Love your story! Can't wait to find out what happens next!