I wished they brought over Leorio's strength from either the manga or the anime. It seems he got weaker with every iteration.

Why do people get so worked up over indirect kisses?! It doesn't really count! Geez. It's so cheap.

Not even gonna lie, I was a lil scared after reading the comments. I really wanted to get stuck into another HXH fanfic, but after all those reviews mostly consisting of the words...OOC, Mary-Sue, OP...I immediately was hoping for the worst.

And I'm sorry to say that I only lasted after paragraphs, I tried, believe me.. I did but...as soon as I read that she would immediately have all her necessities given to her right when she arrives to the HXH world I-

I feel obligated to say I'm sorry for not reading through the whole story since its already been marked completed but-...

I’m really sorry, but I couldn’t read another chapter. Killua is way too OOC. He would never be so patient and have time for Yukikos problems, and most likely label her as an “annoying girl” and dismiss her. He’s still a 12 year old boy, I doubt he has any interests in girls at this point (in a romantic sense, but as a friend that would be far more plausible). And overall, yukiko is unrealistic and unlikable (as well as way too OP). Not to mention the storyline is very generic, there’s nothing special about it. I really gave this a go, and I appreciate the effort you must have put into this.

I think you did great on the point of view change -

I just love it and can wait to see little YukioxKillua children running around!(Don't judge)

I JUST FINISHED THIS STORY IN THREE DAYS AND IM SHOOKED! But I really love it! But the ending made me cry BUT IT WAS REALLY GOOD! I’m having mixed feeling right now!

I think I should have read the reviews before reading this fanfiction. The ending was horrible. From reading the comments I have learned what a Mary sue is and I think that's what's in the fanfiction. I did read the entire story and I didn't hate. Maybe its just me but I really disliked the ending. Even so, props to the writer for writing this many chapters.

I'm really sorry, but this story is really no good. This story seems to have been written by a fangirl with absolutely no writing skills. The characters are too OOC and it seems follow the anime completely sometimes even word for word. Also your OC is a Mary-Sue no doubt about it. She suddenly gets transported to the HxH world and is all of a sudden strong enough to be on par with the other characters? Nope, that definitely smells like a Mary-Sue. Also she seems to somehow get along with all the characters even though some of the other characters are known for keeping their distance from others. Which lead to the OOC problem once again. This is a Fanfiction so you do you, but others will most likely not enjoy it.

Howe old are kill and Yukiko? Because if they are 12, they're still kids, right?

This chapter was so heartwarming~!

Damn it, Gon! YOU RUINED THE FREAKIN MOMENT! THOUGH I STILL LOVE YOU, YOU ADOROBLE CINNAMON ROLL, I CAN'T GET OVER THE FACT THAT YOU RUINED IT!

Aww~ How kawaii~! This whole chapter has been so cute and sweet. I feel like I'm getting a cavity.

That was one shity anding i HATE it i cred for 4 houres

i'm sorry to say this but, isn't yukiko a marry sue?