Oh ho? Very clever Tsunade! I'm impressed. Hopefully, they'll get Danzo before he has the chance to flee. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Ok, this is an excellent pair of chapters! I look forward to seeing where this goes in the future, thank you!

I would love to see you continue this. It's emotional and thought-provoking, and just plain good.

If you ever update this story can you PM me? I would love to read more!

I like it, is not like triforce, but is good, I will wait for the next chapter and see how you doing with that history and what you do with sakura I wait you not going to make her the worst bicht of the village or something like that.. I know there is the uchiha but somehow.. not sure.. let see what happen next, good job and continue with the fic

(is like I had already coment here and I dint remember it lol so I post again my coment and ect, good luck in that fic )

Interesting.

I'm guessing this is based of the NaruSaku story The Broken Fox where Naruto cracks tries to kill himself and gets married to Sakura? If so than you really need to work on it for it to be even close to that story. Naruto hardly cracked. You had too much action and not enough banter. Finally do you know what really makes a hurt/comfort/angst story for this pairing? Sakura opening her big mouth either out of rage, blind ignorance, or even cheating on Naruto after getting together with him.

Interesting start to your story. I am looking forward to where you take this. I hope to see more soon.

Thank you for the story.

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You did a great job with this one. :) Can't wait to read more.

This is fairly interesting to read. However, i have just discovered a story of a very similar nature "The Broken Fox" . I hope that this story deviates somewhat from that. While this is written very well the sign of a good writer isn't to copy an entire plot of a story and use that but to develop the plot themselves and allow it to flow in a different direction to the other.

let see how you doing and if i like it or not

may said is for me tha history is a test you need tpass in my opinion to cntinue or not or apoyarte in thefanfic

jus now imstill love the broken fox from Triforce Guardian, but you going good and somehow new to read, hehe uchiha had get some kick in him ass lol

what going to do wiht sakura? tha temst important forme fr the history :D beside naruchan

So you've taken the challenge huh ? Nice. You did a great job with the first chapter. There were not many errors and the story is good. I just want to know what you will do with sakura. Hope you don't make her act like a bitch. Please don't make her that way. Hope you update soon.