It's quite good! I didn't expect it to develop the way it did even though it's only a little bit of story. But at the end, I don't think Derek would say those things. He's pretty awkward and an angry man lol, and I would expect him to say nothing and probably just glare at him and maybe say the last bit. Otherwise it's great! With the show, Braeden and Derek are together, so I see that working out more, so if you were to continue this type of interracial romance with Teen Wolf, then I would go with those two. Great story!

Hahahaha that's funny