your so right you can never have to much toothcup

New to this fandom but love this story. I dont know if you ever made a sequel, about to go check. If you didn't I definitely recommend you do because I would love to see how the deal with there secret relationship back on berk. Thanks again for the read.

I have to say, that banter between Stormfly and Hookfang was quite enjoyable.

I love these storys. I've noticed your imagination is so strong and i wish you could write these storys as a job .

I would recormend you gave astrid show up at one point aswell just to have some love in the air but as toothless says to sighn off i myst go grrrrrrr

Omg. Please come back and update this awesome story.

Bitte ein neues Kapitel, denn die Geschichte stet ja nicht als fertig.

Yeah nevermind. These were good chapters up until now because first of all dragons (according to other stories) don't understand human feelings or mating and don't show them the same way. I mean I support happiness and stuff (gays and lesbians deserve happiness),but this was weird and kind of wrong. Toothless is a guy and so is Hiccup and what about Astrid and Stormfly because this is nasty.

Well crud

Wow, this is by far the best Toothcup story I have ever read. I love how the plot evolved from them being mere platonic friends to now mates. Despite the few grammar/spelling mistakes, it was very well written. I do hope that you find the time to continue writing this story in the future or at least some variation of it.

Love the story but I'm dyeing here I want to read more heres an idea hiccup try's make toothless take him back in the moreing but toothless won't let him get on his back but in a sensitive way not mean or hostile way and they set up like a base or house there and stay there and maybe Astrid shows up by useing the dealy nadders good smell tracking skills to find hiccup but convinces her to stay and live there like dragons edge but just Astrid toothless and storm fly and she dose not go back and tell any one to berk she and hiccup are considered the worst dead but they stay there for the rest of there lives with there dragons but that my idea not that you need help but I would love that hope you comment back on my comment to show me you still do fanfiction and not done with it peace oh yea im 16 year old and still love the movie and more of this story

Y?! I hate cliffhangers! Y?! I like this story and how you have parts where the dragons can talk to each other. I was wondering if you could have Hiccup learn the language later so he and Toothless could have a conversation. if not totally understand. Thank you for writing!

love it.
please write more.
wow.

This took me way longer to read than originally planned. It was a really good story. I love the plot and the characters are really good. The only problem I could ever see was some small grammar mistakes but they are not bad. This reminds me of one of my favorite fanfics I have read. I would like to ask if I could read this on YouTube as the first five to go on my chanel, I hope you say yes this story was awesome.

This first chapter is really good, a little setup is never a bother. It adds to the story and gives it more life. There are some grammar issues but they are easy to understand. I shall now read the rest and post one last review when I have finished. This looks to be a great story.

Nice story , love it, keep up the wonderful work I wish I could post my first story, I'm just a chicken about it