this is very gooooooooooooodddddd

GAHHHHHH why are you doing this to me? I'm dying from this fluff! Love it ah

Ha, ha! I loved this! The world's end! Thanks a lot sirius... siriusly! (I know it's a rubbish pun!)

This was a good idea, and I liked the story. I was expecting some major snogging though haha.

I also noticed quite a few grammatical errors, and you kept using 'Minerva' instead of 'McGonagall'.

Again, this story isn't horrible, but in the future, I would recommend finding a beta reader to help out. :)

Y'know I've a special love for all your fics! U write so fukin' well! Really I just loved it!as soon I remember my login I'll favorite this one sz
Keep writin' amazing fics like this one! Congrats

xoxo ;*