Love the Hiccup / Toothless interactions and the whole escapade to rekindle Toothless' memory as well as the evidence that Hiccup was well not doing well without his dragon friend.

ch 3

Amnesia . And as I remember even the returning of the memory is shrouded in mistery . And the one who remembers was supposed to be the worst enemy .

Beautiful story! Love it

Why did you make Stoick into an incredibly cruel person?! He is not like that! He treats dragons as equals now, not like pets or enemies!

Swear words are in T and M fanfics, please change the rating.

Simply put... Perfection.

You have a bad habbit of not putting a completes sign on your works after they are done. You know, most of the time I search for works with that criteria?

Also, Stoic's reasoning was weak. He heard Hiccup say Toothless remembered him, and he was acting like a madman. If he was supposedly protecting Hiccup, he wouldn't have shot him.

Also, you never explained the Changewing, or how the blood of Hiccup healed them. The most likely explanation is that the Changewing himself healed them with his fire.

Idk, the story was pretty confusing. Great work you two, anyway.

I could not stop reading this story till the end *blinks away own tears* It was so wonderful. I loved every minute of it. I am so glad you shared this. Thank you so very much it was worth the lack of sleep! :)

Teshy

:)

Wow touching once again . For returning mine here is my post :

It is me again . I feel happy emotion explosion , happyness of the Memory explosion which unlocked the forgotten memories , starting partly over in better times , But still deaf STOIC Who thinks you know for Tooth now and befour he saw . Even after he saw it himself . TWICE .

Whops emergency I am now a little sleepy it is me aagai I mean :

The other adress I send was a mistaken one .My email adress which is my post is the name I am logged in.
ivanganev1992
So send me on :
and I will respond!

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I OWAYS HO
PE FOR THE BEST AND FEAR AND EXPECT THE WORST .
I hope Toothless to remember , belive after the story . I hope Hic to draw the whole story and by that to remember . Will that Changewing show itself( I don't know it's gender ) to live in harmony , or at least to describe his observations .
For response here is my post which is
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Interesting, this is sort of a divergent of the immortality story, as Hiccup and Toothless can talk to each other, and they both have "internal flame".

I was not expecting the sudden length of the last chapter, and was glad that it was so long, as it would tie up loose ends. Very nice story altogether, and with were it was going, I'm surprised it didn't just end with toothcup.