i wished kotetsu could've been in contact with his old friends since he went w the troupe. i feel ashamed of kotetsu and sad because his old friends mostly bunny' spent a years and some months trying to find him. Wish he would've been with bunny but i like that he's happy. I also feel that Tiger could've went back to his hometown where is daughter is and just visit the troupe and the heroes or have them visit him, that would've been the best outcome of this story

I liked this story. But, just kotetsu being with someone other than Barnaby, kind of doesn't sit well. This story was great, hands down, but it just made me sad that kotetsu left, and other stuff. And a reference to the movie, you sly dog. But anyways, it was a good story, well written, but it just wasn't my cup of tea. Keep writing, don't let me bring you down, i'm a writer to, and I t ake feed back no matter what kind it it :)

uh...im kind of iffy on kotetsu-chan playing for the other team. I don't mind, but, it just feels as if he's betraying his wife, even if he lost his memories. I like the story, its well written, it's just that small detail.

This was just perfect. I am delighted that Tiger reunited with the Troupe, namely, with Axel. They're just, well... for lack of better word, perfect. I am beyond thrilled that they ended up with one another. And it truly warmed my heart that Bunny was able to move on with his life too. They were so many memorable scenes in this chapter that I adored, but my absolute favourite had to have been Kotetsu introducing himself to the Troupe and likewise. That was simply beautiful and touching. I have genuinely enjoyed your OCs and I hope it's not the last we'll see of them. Excellent writing, I am a big fan of your work and hope you'll continue writing. Thank-you for the wonderful story!

It's definitely a good chapter - great, in fact! I absolutely loved Dixon and Axel in this chapter -they're such a funny duo! I love Axel's heart-wrenching display of affection for Kotetsu and Dixon's snarky remarks. And the interaction Kotetsu had with the twins (including that scene with his daughter) were so heart-warming and sweet. Kotetsu is such a big softie, you've done an excellent job showcasing his personality as well as keeping him in character. And I must say that during the course of this chapter, I felt a little twinge in heart thinking that Kotetsu may never see the Troupe again, but the end left me feeling hopeful that he would. Anyway, excellent work! I'm off to read the last instalment!

Well done! I honestly loved the ending and how you tied The Rising into it. I really liked the twist that you put in on the end, I wasn't expecting it and I'm rather pleased. Thank you for giving us such a different kind of story! Much love to you and good luck on your future projects!

Very nicely done ...I noticed you mentioned the * other * partner ...?
Should of had tiger beat the ryan ...sighs.
As you can read I'm not his fan...and won't be until I get to view the whole movie
It just seems all the canon characters to all my fandoms are left high and dry..sighs

Hoping dear lady you do return the tiger to the bunny in your next adventure ...
Yes this was good,and we all knew he would be returning to the troupe ..
But
you have to admit ...tiger and the rabbit belong together ...ala your &Bunny story

This chapter actually made me cry. Not shed a tear, but cry. It was beautifully written. I loved how the troupe views Kody/Kotetsu/Wild Tiger as their family. Doesn't matter what name he goes by or which path he chooses, he'll always be their family, even if that means letting him go. And you had be worried their for a second that you were going to kill poor Kody off! Phew, thank goodness that didn't happen! I loved all the scenes in this chapter, but my favourite where the scenes Kotetsu had with Barnaby and Axel. My heart broke for both of them, but in different ways. It's obvious that both men love Kotetsu very much. You have such a natural born talent, I hope you'll continue to gift us with your work. Anyway, great stuff! I can't wait for more!

And I read over there ...will post kudos when i get the chance

Question...why do you insist on making me cry...?... again you owe me another box of tissues.
between you and another ff writer in the xxxholic fandom .. i am a puddle of totally useless goo
Awaiting the next chapter eagerly

Hi there. I find your writing really interesting, and the plot is interesting too, but I gradually stopped reading parts because of the OC invasion. Please, don't take me wrong, the story is really good and I don't intend to be rude or something, it's just that I like reading about Tiger & Bunny characters, not a story with 90% of it full of OC's. You see, I enjoyed myself a lot reading the part when Barnaby cried after realizing he had lost Kotetsu, or his last talk with Kotetsu just before he loses his memories. Still, it's your fanfic, and I respect that, and it's really well written. I just wanted to express my point of view.

Take care,

Lorena.

Yay! They finally did the deed! I just love your writing. It's captivating and filled with heart. And I know by now I must sound like a broken record (forgive me!) but I simply adore your OCs. When an OC - or multiple in this case! - adds to a storyline's plot and characterization without taking away from it, for me, that is a sign of a talented writer. And let me tell you, you have loads of talent! Your OCs fit right into the T&B universe, in fact they could very well have their own storyline. But when it comes to favourites, Axel takes the cake for me. He and Kody give me such mushy, warm feelings - you've created a truly adorable ship! And I found the interaction between the Heroes and the Troupe so entertaining. I especially liked the spider web part! Excellent work, I can't wait for more!

Sorry for my late review! Anyway, I just loved this chapter and I just love your OCs. Kody and Axel were positively adorable as usual! You've created/written some excellent scenes in this chapter, but I especially enjoyed Axel finding Kody and bringing him back "home". ;) Also, the part where Barnaby encountered Kotetsu with Axel really tugged at my heartstrings. Barnaby may not want to admit it, but I think deep down he knows that his former parter has fallen for someone else. Poor Bunny, my heart goes out to him, but at the same time, I am rooting for Axel, I just love that fella. And when it comes down to Kotetsu/Kody, I believe that even though his mind may not remember where he's from, his heart knows where he belongs. He and the rest of the Troupe mesh together so well, they give of the vibe of a true family. Excellent work, I can't wait to read another exciting chapter!

I just love Axel and Kody together, they're adorable. In my opinion, they work better than the original T&B pairing! And I feel slightly guilty for saying this, but... I enjoy your OCs far more than the T&B characters. Anyway, the plot has thickened! I am incredibly intrigued to discover if Tiger's memories will return upon coming face-to-face with Barnaby. However, I am biting my nails at the thought of Axel's heart being broken! I'm slight torn on this because I feel that canonically, T&B belong together. But in this case, I am more inclined towards Axel and Kody. Anyway, I'm not sure how this story-line going to play out, but one thing's for sure, I am greatly enjoying its originality and cannot wait for more!

Pacific Rimmmmmm ... mecha deliciousness ..gundam style
Del toro is a male otaku mecha fan ..they were gaga over him in japan and he was gaga over the 5 story mecha statue on display
.giggling like a school kid.

Doctor gottlieb ( burn gorman) funny as hell ...charlie day ..no so funny

Best chapter yet! This was simply brilliant, I really loved it. As always, I find your writing captivating and heartfelt, but truth be told, this chapter was some your best work as of yet! Your OCs are so well-written and well conceived, as a reader, I am fascinated by their personalities and would like to know more about them. However, Axel is fast becoming favourite of mine - he was beyond adorable in this chapter! And damn you! But I'm now incredibly fond of the Kody/Axel paring! I'm most curious to see how Barnaby is going to fit into this, a love triangle perhaps? However, I would hate to see Axel's heart become broken... You have such a natural gift when it comes to writing, I truly hope you decide to go pro some day. But until then, I'll be happy to read your work on here. :) Excellent work, I can't wait for more!