Great book

Always nice to read a story with Konohamaru

Damn, Neji came ready to go

Shikamaru's plan was good, and Choji's addition was extremely welcome, especially because of what he brought to the table

Ah yeah, that was hotter, Shikamaru was a good addition

While I did prefer Kiba topping, Naruto gangbanging him was very good

So weird!

Omg that was oddly amazing

It would be better if you had one knowing what they were doing, or have them completely overtaken by instinct/lust instead of having all of them be like "oh, I saw someone do this, you wanna do it too?" " okay!" other than that, it was pretty good.

Good but they're a bit OOC

Hooray! for needing . . to . . . pee?
great story, love your lemons ;)

the universe thinks Shika's plan is going to slow haha

i like shika's plan and while the thought can be disturbing about the bugs, i feel sorry that Shino almost always gets left out, but when they aren't compatibly what can you do? *shrug*

This is sooo funny omw totally unepexted! Am laughing mi tail off here, loooool!

"After a couple of minutes watching the show, Naruto felt aroused himself, But he was shampoo, he couldn't do anything."
I don't know why, but that part made me laugh hysterically . Keep writing, lol.