Can’t remember the last time a story made me cry so much, think I wept through each chapter.
Beautifully written, raw, emotional, hard to read but worth the journey to grief with the Tracy’s and honor Scott, Virgil and IR.
Glad I finished before I go work, would have been a mess reading this at my desk.

OMG, had to take a break from reading for the rest of this evening, u’ve had me in tears since the beam :((( my heart is breaking.
I’ve loved the Thunderbirds since I was a kid, watching the original series and had a crush on Virgil, but after reading hundreds and hundreds of Fanfic stories Gordon has really shined.
This story is so heart wrenching, you have written it beautifully. I can feel the grief, the pain. The kindness of the fire crew, I still have a way to go but had to leave u a message. Hope u are still reading comments:))) now to see if I can get through another chapter or two.

Oh my god. I read your story in one sitting and cried through it. Damn, it broke my heart with the emotions it pours into you as you read it. But it didnt surprise me when Scott followed Virgil, there is something extra in their bond. An amazing and emotional story you have written.

I have never read a story so overwhelming that I felt like I had received a physical blow! I had to stop at the end of chapter 3 so I didn't break down at work. My Co-workers were actually concerned after I nearly fell to my knees... wow 0_o

There was a reason i never read death fics and i dont know what i was thinking when i started this. But i loved your writing and thats what half pushed me to read this. The writing was very smooth as well as the plot and continuing the rest of the story with five remaining Tracys. I honestly wasn't expecting Scott's death and that hit harder than Virgil's and i broke. I basically bawled from that moment on and continued till the end. Safe to say i wont be trying another one, i am way to invested in them all to take any of their deaths easily.

But i really loved the way it was written and i enjoyed the story and how they held each other up. I would have like to see how John actually coped when he was alone but that would be my opinion because i see him as someone who as much as needed his family around him, needed to be alone and properly digest how their future will be without his brothers and just generally make peace not only with their deaths and with himself. But again, its a personal opinion and you really did an awesome job.

But i'm definitely not gonna even go close to another death fic for the Tracys again. Not even another as well written as this one.

I first read this way, way back, before I had an account or left reviews on anything. (I still have no idea how I found it in the first place.) It was my first experience reading deathfics, and I thought it did well. Anyway, in the modern era I somehow managed to find this thing again, and it's still the best deathfic I've ever read. Well done. This has definitely earned its slot in my favourites.

read to chapter 18 I cant read anymore well not at the moment, way to sad I need some cheering up now well done tho

Wow *cries uncontrollably* that was so heart wrenching. I think of them being almost immortal because they always survived on tv but this story reminds that they are normal people. I think you did a fantastic job with this

Hi Emma.

I feel incredibly, incredibly guilty for taking so long to review this. Stupid university got in my way of writing and reading fanfic big time!

Words honestly can't describe how heart-wrenching and beautiful this story was. Despite the story content, I can honestly say that this, among with your other Tracy stories, has well and truly earned its place in my favourite stories.

Raw, true to life, heart-wrenching and just so, so tender, I was in tears every chapter and almost dreaded opening each alert. Not because I didn't want to read, but because the fic was just so alluring that I physically couldn't NOT read it.

I'm literally speechless at how much this story moved me, and I once again must give you my sincere congratulations on another fantastic, brilliant story.

Keep it up, and I definitely look forward to the next one.

Hugs. Xxxxxx

Everyday I hesitantly opened the email for the update for this story...not because it was a story I dreaded but because it was one that just broke my heart. Death and grief are not easy subjects and when paired with our beloved Tracys it makes it even more difficult.

I can only imagine that if I cried whilst reading it that you cried whilst writing the story. Grnfield, thank you for sharing a story that even though was incredibly sad and heart-wrenching was well-written and one, that despite the tears I shed, I don't regret reading.

For a death fic, this was compelling, if sometimes difficult to read. To kill of one Tracy is bad enough but to kill two Tracys in as many chapters, now that takes courage. You must also have confidence in your own writing to believe that the remaining Tracys could carry off a multi chapter story. I think updating daily was a clever move, as it meant we did not get a chance to recover emotionally from one chapter to the next.

Jeff's long overdue talk with Lucille should excise his demons, then there will be only two 'no go' subjects.

Very well done.

great chapters

So I guess you really killed them. It wasn't even a dream. I don't know what to think or what to say. Goodbye cruel world.

I'm crying my eyes out here...

Awe, cute.