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Hahaha...23 is my lucky number

Rei just tackled somebody, so she might as well consider herself a proxy now. (Please tell me somebody got that joke)

And the savage of the year award goes to...Slenderman!

I usually don't like stories like this, but for some reason I'm really enjoying this one. Maybe it's because I find Slenderman's limited knowledge of humans funny, or maybe because I relate to Rei's hatred of herself and humanity. Whatever it is, I really like this story so far.

I don't know why, but I just love the way Slenderman talks. It reminds me of one my characters who literally never speaks in contractions, like I'm, I'd, Don't, You're, ect.

Slender was in my dream the other night and he was a horse.

Hey, VortexEssence7!
I've read this story some months ago (Yeah, hit me for not reviewing as an anon DX) and I have to say that this story is really good written.
The characters, the plot and in my opinion especially the sudden twists in the story itself. I bet no one thought that there would be some kind of evil doctor in it who tortures people. Shocking but a good way of shocking.
And - just saying - Slender is so fucking cute. Like the whole time. A bunny? Really? XD
The only thing I missed is Jeff. I do not like him but I wished that there would be some kind of climax in the plot with Jeff in it. It's a bit disappointing that the never showed up again. ;(
With this things said: I really like this story. Like really, really. Not loving it, but...yeah, I'm repeating myself. XD
Oh, the cover is great, too. Fitting. Just fitting and dark. My muse is amazed by this.
You got yourself a favorite! *Cookies and...bunnies? Whatever*

Well that was kind of a let down. I loved the story, even going as far as to stay up late to finish it, but then Rei just had to be turned into a "monster" and leave her parents. But I have no right to complain about it :/ Anw, it made me sacrifice my normal sleeping schedule so it was good :)

Happy Birfday!
Sounds like a wild dream you had about Slendy. And yeah, I have weird dreams too. I had one last night that Donald Trump was at a mall and being like a mall Santa, and kids could go up and sit in Donald Trump's lap and get their picture taken with him. God, dreams sure are weird.
And also HELL YEAH THEY KISSED I'M SCREEEEEEEEAAAAAMMMMMIIIIINNNNNGGGGGGG
I love how Slendy freaked out when she told him to go throw his tantrum somewhere else. And that was kind of hot, how he like kissed her neck and had his tendrils going to, as Rei puts it, "dangerously high areas of my thigh". Not mine (I fuckin wish lmao), Rei's. I had to keep the wording as it was since it was in quotes. If you can't tell I'm super tired, you're keeping me up all night with this damn amazing story.
Also, when the towel came undone he held it closed, he's a gentleman, so CUUUUUUUUUTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEE
Love this chapter!

I am doing quite well today. And I love TribeTwelve too, Noah is indeed a drama queen.
Slendy is such a dork, stealing the candy bars.
Are you sponsored by Frosted Mini-Wheats or something? Rei has such an obsession with them. I don't mind, I think it's cute actually. I like them too lol.
And dammit, Rei and Slendy! Kiss already! KISS KISS KISS! *starts chanting and throwing candy hearts at them*
I wonder who the proxy was. It sounds kinda like Jane the Killer, but she's not a proxy, is she? Ah, hell, it's your fanfiction, you can make whoever you want a proxy. Make Obama a proxy if you want. That'd be interesting to see.
Love this chapter!

"You'll spontaneously combust or something because you're not being evil anymore". I love Rei's dialouge so much.
I love how Slendy was holding her hand when she was calling her parents. He's being such a softie, I love it so much.
I really like Annabelle too. Giving Rei that picture - so sweet.
Love this chapter!

Oh my god, I love how Rei and Slendy met back up at the end of the chapter. And I think Slendy came to the house because he could sense Matthew and was thinking Rei was gonna kiss him or something.
And yes, Rei's name is so very fitting. She is an absolute ray of sunshine.
Nice chapter!

Oh my god. That ending was so awesome. I really like Matthew now, which is surprising, considering how much I hated him when they first captured her. I love that she saved him - that was super cool.
Also way to show up now, Slendy. Once again, your timing simply can't be beat. Let's have another round of golf claps for ya. But for real, I'm excited to see how the interact now.
Love this story!

I kinda like that she talked to Matthew. I lowkey ship them now. I hope Slendy doesn't materialized and kill me for writing that. I can only speak the truth!
The doctor is a creep.
Loved this chapter!