I love when Takano say "Mine"!

Possessive Takano in the heat of the moment is HOT!

.speechless.

The only word that I can say after reading it was 'beautiful' there's no other word to describe it. Just beautiful.

You're a very gifted author, and I really enjoyed reading your stories, hope to read more from you and keep up the good work!

I believe I reviewed this a while back, but, I'm much more literate and mature now. This is by far my favorite fanfiction written for Sekai Ichi Hatsukoi. Thank you so much for writing this.

This is probably the best one-shot I've read in a while. And not only for this pairing.
Your writing is beautiful, so in character and just plain awesome. And so, so human too. Not just the sex, mind you, but how you played with their emotions and wrote exceptionally well from Takano's point of view.
A gem, I say.
Brilliant.

Great job! beautifully written

Not only did a...'small' nosebleed come to take a visit...

*hides all the blood-soaked tissues*

But, I think I just fell in love with this fanfiction...

So well written, feels likes I'm reading the literature version of the manga. Very nice. No, not nice, AMAZING. WONDERFUL.

YAOI SALUTE! ;)

Good god. This is powerfully, beautifully written. Seriously, bravo! :D

holy...-covers nose before it gushes blood- that was beautiful...-dies-

Beautiful story

I am speechless. Must. Pick. Up. Jaw. Off. Floor.

that was beautifully written

*stares at the screen* This. Fic. Is. BEAUTIFUL. O_O It's the best I've read in...*thinks*... five months. While I was reading it, I'd have this tendency to stand up, and start fangirling. [No one has witnessed this but my sister]. And not all fics make me do that. :D

man that was so hot! and well written 3
possesive!takano is really sexy ah i love it!

I can't even begin to describe how absolutely perfect this fic is. It's the best smut that I've read in months, so well-written, sexy and in character! I'm really looking forward to more of your stories, so far this one has left me really impressed

('o') *Claps* That was written so well! Like really awesome, if I could like hand you a golden llama I would.