Please update this story is so good and can't wait to see what happens next

Ooo you updated this on my Birthday xD. I can't wait to see Narissa and the baby safe. I have a feeling that Lucas will be regretting ever laying a hand on her! I was really hoping Robin would make a turn for the better but I guess some people are just too far gone. If she had been raised better then maybe she would have turned out alright. Tho her first impression of of the pack wasn't the best her acting like a bitch did not help. I hope she can turn around but I really doubt she ever will. It would take something huge to get though her, it would be really messed up if she ended up getting one of the pack members killed. If that where to happen banishment would not be enough she would have to be killed as sad as that is.

I cant wait to see Harry's reaction to finding out what Robin did! Shes such a spoiled brat. I feel bad for what's happened to her but that doesn't excuse any of her other actions. She needs a thorough reality check

Tfw you look for smut but you get feels T-T

OMG this chapter is fantastic and i could kill robin! so worth the wait. can't wait to see what you have coming next x

And it took me four days but I finally reread and caught up to the latest chapter. I deeply love your OC's you have indeed quite the talent in creating them and give each of them their unique personalities and backgrounds.

Let me tell you for over a billion words and close to half way through the second it's quite impressive to keep track of all of them and their developments. I only found two tiny plotholes that could be easy to fix with a minor modification or an added explanation. 1. Harry asking twice for that true potion. Just modify the second time as him asking for a second vile as he needed two of them for two people. Super easy to fix. 2. Moody had already went and even entered to Greyback's territory to pick on Harry's kid. Just add a few more sentences to deeply explain why he had forgotten their location like the new and stronger wards the second they were installed from then on it confuses the Ministry and the Order's from finding the location once again...not affecting Voldemort as his gang were literally on the border at that time to be truly affected by it. Fixed.

Now to what I really want to write about. I deeply love your slice of life, but I have to be honest I'm deeply intrigued but at the same time deeply worried with your story in another angle. It's true that Fenrir has recruited a couple of more Were's...but man he should really consider creating a hidden base elsewhere as a way to let his pack escape on time if things get really bad in the end...but beyond this he should really consider going outside of the country and ally himself with outside packs or ally himself with other "monsters" at this point to realistically improve his chances of survival.

The second one is what I'm really more concerned about and intrigue on how in the end you are planning to resolve all of these issues. I can't wait to find, since while it's true that Fenrir's pack has grown... it's also true that the villains are multiplying far beyond at this point to actually believe that only his pack would ever be able to beat them all.

After rereading all of this I'm just going to add here all the villains and potential future villains to see how huge the villain side is to tell you what I mean.

Voldemort, Death Eaters, Ministry, Daily Prophet, Voldemort's dangerous werewolf pack that is growing super rapidly with knowledge of how to kill in many ways, Voldemort's super dangerous Basilisk, Dumbledore, Order of the Phoenix, random discriminatory groups, insider villain(Robin), Quinn(through Robin, but also the chance that his background girl is actually connected to a group of dedicated hunters), Micha(another Werewolf pack? A Hunter?)...and many more I didn't mentioned since I don't consider them as dangerous but the list is growing and growing with every new chapter... and the list to combat all of this to realistically fight all of this without hurting your realism of the story? And with some of them compromised still do to current circumstances like three of the pack unable to fight back without causing the death of a love one in Voldemort's hands.

Yep I'm worried...but I'm still hopeful to see how you are planning to combat all do this. Maybe it's time to introduce some development that could even the odds a bit? Lol, maybe Micha's bar 'friend" is not a super villain after all that just wants to rape him but a spy from an outsider pack that is thinking of an alliance? Just a thought, since I don't know what your planning to do in the end...since I know that in the end no matter the happy moments and the sad ones this is still a slice of life in the literal form(all of this words and Harry is still not even close to ending this year...so the story is going in a day by day basis)...but hopefully this comment will serve as a reminder of how unbalanced and unrealistic their chances of survival are right now. And that's not even counting the fact that not all of the members are able or even trained to actually fight.

Well, this is a wait and see comment. Let's see what the future brings. Hope you update soon.

Really good chapter, thank you for updating so soon :) I hope Harry and Fenrir meet again soon, I really miss them together. Robin is such a beast, and I hate her, I really hope you will make her suffer for her betrayal.

Good work for the gel but aconite is the 2nd dangerous poison in the vegetable world did you think there will be some consequences for extra use

You over explain everything. Instead of just letting the story itself /show/ what's happening, you /tell/ every little detail of why a character is doing something. It really turns into a wordy info dump when you do this. It's sometimes okay that explain things to such a degree but when I'm having to skim over two paragraphs of unnecessary backstory/character thought explanation, it's too much. A lot of times, the dialogue or the characters actions, appearance, and/or additude tells you all you need to know.

EX: Snape screwed his face into an ugly sneer before with a swift turn of his heel, he left Harry and his friends standing in the middle of the hallway, his robes billowing behind him as he stormed off.

This tells me:
a) Mr. Sneers-a-lot is not only disgusted but also feels underlying hatred for whatever disgusted him.
b) He's got a few screws loose if he has feels that much hatred towards a child. (if we ignore the fact that we know why he hates the child, but then it just tells us he's petty).
c) We are introduced/shown his drama-queen side when he billows his robes. The subtletie of it makes not a foreign concept but in the back of our head, we are thinking that's he is overdramatic at times.

These three points add just as much if not more character in one sentence than three of your paragraphed internal monologues.

Food for thought.

""What do you need?" she asked him gently. It wasn't much, but those three words lifted Severus' heart..."

Those are four words...

I am so happy you've updated! Love the story! :) well done!

Love the story so far, looking forward to the next chapter.

i fucking hate dumbdore

I was not expecting that XD This chapter was of course beautifully written just as I come to expect of this awesome fanfic! I was just thrown in for a loop at Romy’s actions Because I felt as though this was a step backwards in her character progression however it was justified. I felt that if she could forgive Dean (though I don’t know if anybody could), that would’ve spoken volumes about her moving on from her past pain. I love this chapter regardless because the pack’s together! And Jaylon gets his kisses! Finally! Keep on writing and being awesome, your fans love you :)

I’ve be here from the start I can’t wait for the next chapter