Still as 'persuasive' as ever.

i had a guess why his ex-girlfriend was glowing from Ritsu's description. it was true! XD

I always enjoying Jealous Ritsu!
love it!

You made Takano absolutely naughty! And i love you for it. ;)

I've just finished reading all of your Takano/Onodera tics and I must say you have a great handle on their characters, right down to their thoughts and actions. I'd love to see you write more of this pairing.
Well done!

I really liked this :) They were very in character and it was a genuinely good idea. I enjoyed Ritsu's feelings as well as Takano being devious. Though I do feel the sex was a little unrealistic in the sense that they are both men and even if they have been together countless times, preparation and lubrication is needed. So on the front it was a little hard to imagine, since it would be painful. It wasn't a very long section, so it's all good. The rest of the fic was amazing, and I hope to read more in the future :)

eso es verdad, eso es verdad, todos sabemos de alguien que siempre se sale con la suya ese es takano-san

*thumbs up* Very in-character!

The are sooo in character ;) It was fun to read!