Pls update

Boi.

What about Natsu being able to smell Lucy on Gray and the twins? He'll know right away.

Nooooo! I love this story it might be set at a 12 year mind but as long as you keep watching it along with loving to write can help you try to keep this story going

I read the entire series I must say I loved it. Sad that it will never be continued, but you did one hell of a great job on this

Hello there, I liked how the story started off but your grammar was horrible & some of your spelling was too. I can't read a story/book that has too many mistakes. You never ended the story well, it was terrible. There was never a nalu moment & this story is supposed to be about nalu. Wow. Try again next time.

plz if it's a nalu story stick to it,i don't like the fact that gray lied to the twin's and that he's starting to fall in love with Luce

please continue this story!

I hope Lucy and Gray dies. I really fucking hate them in this story denying Natsu of his kids. Pieces of shit.

Nice

Lisanna is a backstabber

What happened to the rest of the story? I want to hear the end of this nalu story I really am enjoying this, I stayed up till 5 am this morning wanting to read all 16 chapters but unfortunately I only got to chapter 14, but please do upload the rest of this, I really love nalu

Fucking hell you need to work on your punctuation, grammar, and spellings.

OMG SO GOOD I LOVE IT IM ABOUT TO DIE OF FANGIRLING CANT WAIT FORTHE NEXT ONE LOVE YOUR STORIES XD

im so very excited to read the nxt chapter i can't wait ahahaha... what will happen next. i am waiting for the update of chapter 17 and so on...