| Reviews for Beneath the Jumper |
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Guest chapter 7 . 5/25 Enjoyed |
Joanna Moriarty chapter 1 . 10/18/2016 Amazing story! "I'll remove the bulletproof shirt if you stop wearing your favorite purple one." ha ha ha! Loved the story! |
quoththeraven5 chapter 7 . 10/29/2014 this story was beautiful! You captured their friendship perfectly :) |
quoththeraven5 chapter 1 . 10/29/2014 I love your use of capital letters, you have used them perfectly :) |
jack63kids chapter 7 . 5/9/2014 I love this story. The interplay between them, the little mysteries - though I'm glad you didn't go for robot! - that it is well written and witty. Fun and enlightening on characterisation. I also think that keeping the last chapter short really works. What else is there to say!? You could go on, but why would you. Less is more sometimes. The introduction of Mycroft as the provider is a good one. He never says he cares, but his actions speak volumes. I hope that your reviews are enough for you to take down your 'apologies' for this fic. Not needed. Not needed at all. It is good! |
jack63kids chapter 6 . 5/9/2014 ;-D Humour runs through out this fic in an understated way. This is nicely overt and you feel the boys relax during this one. |
jack63kids chapter 5 . 5/9/2014 Wonderful chapter! Really well written, lots of good stuff about out boys while staying in canon and characterisation. Bliss! |
jack63kids chapter 4 . 5/9/2014 'Sherlock isn't the first nutter of a friend I've had...' - bet he's not! ;-D Ok, it was my first though and not 'angel', mutant, robot... I'm glad really. Works for me. |
jack63kids chapter 3 . 5/9/2014 I love how you are teasing your audience with this. I wish I'd tuned in while you were posting... needs even more suspense... but there's bucket loads of that, believe me. I have a surprising number of explanations btw, some more mundane than others... |
jack63kids chapter 2 . 5/9/2014 Oh! Crumbs! Oof! More surprises. What are you doing to us! Ok, me! Making me use a lot of exclamation marks anyway! Love Sherlock's thoughts, very apt, especially his judgement on the criminal, telling himself off for his lack of deduction and working out what's going to happen physics-wise when the gun goes off. Neat! |
jack63kids chapter 1 . 5/9/2014 Oh! Unexpected end to the chapter... I was expected something much more predictable and now I am really intrigued. But then as I found your fic via the Non-Slashers Community I should have expected the unexpected. Well written and fun with a mystery based on canon we know... excellent! |
Obscured Angel chapter 7 . 3/3/2014 I've read a few of your stories now, and I really love the way you write Sherlock, it's really well done, especially the way you present his thought process and the key words (Bit Not Good, etc.) that come up. This was another great story and I really enjoyed it. Thank you for writing, posting and completing your stories, it's truly appreciated. |
StArBarD chapter 7 . 9/23/2013 This was crazy sweet and super cute. Two things I love in a fiction that I don't seem to get anymore. |
Xin0Lan chapter 7 . 9/16/2013 The banter between them is entertaining and shows a human side of sherlock. |
CosmicEssence chapter 7 . 9/7/2013 hah this this started off mildly amusing, got h/c and fluffy in the middle and ended with very amusing at the end...loved it! Also I could so see this as being part of the actual show! |