You never wrote Miyagi entering in the bookstore. And also the long streams of talking is hard to follow at times.

OMG I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT. THAT WAS THE BEST PLOT TWISTS EVER TO BE WRITTEN. MY YAOI HEART IS CONSTRICTING... KEEP ON WRITING. I LOVE YOU AND YOUR WRITING SO MUCH!

Waaaaaa for me it was a total twist! Woooow!

I just entered this fanfic (im re-watching Junjou and i was so happy about my favorite pairing that i wanted to read fanfics!) and i find it very well-writenn and very beatiful!

I definitely read it to the end! I want to know whats next!

A child!

Lallen.

Please ..! I couldnt believe you would upbeat the first bachelor party.. but you did .. the bottle game became very exciting... ... specially the dares... Usami is the most cynical and pervert man on the earth... ll ! poor misaki ...!

ohh .. these chapters have been so fun, hilarious and cute and full of wedding cliches and fantasies... Honestly as i was reading them i was so excited and like Aikawa in cloud seven...!

i loved the party they gave to Hiroki.. Althouhg I couldnt believed Nowaki would allow it at the end that Hiroki were in a party with Akihiko and Miyagi.. WHAT WAS HE THINKING!?

Now that i think about it.. i would rather have Nowaki watching some part of the party and getting more jealous.. and having a more hard time with a more relaxed and drunk Hiroki ...

thanks.. keep writing please...

Oh my o h my...

I dont know where to start.. This is too good for a not profesional writer.. ... You described so well the ceremony.. I adore the way the poetry awards were written.. Aikawas speech.. Shijikus speech.. and the formal description of each book nominated... I just ADORE in some many levels the Hiro's san speech... So incredible deep, heart taken and romantic.. and sounded so like him.. just the way i imagine he will speak in front of others.. all serious but honest and mature and goshssshhh I don't have enough english words to properly congratulate you...

This two last chapters were awesome, fun, misterious, romantic, sweet ,sexy and colofull chapter...

You deliver !

OOO MYYY GOODDDD THIS WAS SOO FRICKING AWESOME...
gosh.. i just can imagine Hiroki showering Nowaki the whole day ! this chapter really surprised my .. but now i am worried that nowaki did hear wrong at the door of Hiroki's office...!
mmmmmmm

oh my god ! this is too good! awesome !

Oh my gosh.. I stop reading it for a few months and you update it this much! I better get reading ;3

Loves the story. Few errors but it was amazing. On suggestion, can you do a story on how nowaki & hiroki's kids turn out to be. And the story of misaki & usagi-san's wedding?

That was awesone! This story was simply amazing and I will surely reread it in a few months, congratulation for your wonderful story! :)

I totally loved it...A really good end!
The idea is great. And I especially loved the sentence "cactus of a man" Funny one :D
Thank you so much for letting me read this wonderful story and I'm really looking forward to part II. :D

I loved it!

That was soooo good! I'm so glad that I stuck around for the very end! Please, please, please do a story on Miyagi and Shinobu's engagement and wedding and please let them have kids. I am also hooked on your other story, Chasing Cinderella! I live it! Keep up the good work!