Wow, lo manejaste maravillosamente, las personas más amables son las más aterradoras cuando están enojadas, la verdad es una versión bastante convincente de Jack enojado.

This is perfect in every way. I FULLY agree with you and I am SO BEYOND SICK of reading fanfic where Jack us treated like a child and the Guardians act as if they have authority over him. I feel like those fanfic wipe away everything that makes Jack, well, Jack. It makes is seem like everything he has gone through in his life means nothing and we all know that he can take care of himself, so why do people make it so he can't? Anyway, I love this story and am excited to read the rest of what you have written, we seem to have a similar taste in fandoms. I would really love to see a sequel of this if you would be willing!

OK also, Rotg? Merlin? I'm gonna have to read all your stuff aren't I? Fantastic story so far! Mugestsupipefox directed me your way. Can't wait to read more!

Brilliant!

Love it. Do you think you can make a sequel? It’s so true. I’m not joking I completely agree with you. Although I don’t think North or Bunny would take away his staff, (and I have a feeling you don’t think they would either) but if they were, this would be the perfect reaction. I do highly believe they’ll be able to earn his trust back, just give him time to cool off and time to reflect on good apology words. A sequel would be great. Keep up the good work alright?

You were right to pat yourself on the back, this is awesome! Love the angry side of our winter spirit, wonderfully tensely written and great characterisation of all three, well done!

thank you

True

I haven't read any of those other stories you mentioned, but I do agree with everything you've said. Your fic is written beautifully!

Agreed. I find those stories frustrating and unacceptable as well. Cathartic response.

This is awesome uniqueness and is an awesome way to show another side to Jack's personality

Hey I totally agree with your stance on the way many stories have the guardians tray Jack like a whimsical child that needs to be reprinted when he's over 300 years old. I enjoyed your story a lot, could you try maybe if you want to a follow up chapter with how everything works out in the end? (And how the guardians learn their own lesson :)? )

Please! Please continue this! I need part two asap!

Yes! This is EXACTLY HOW I FEEL AND THINK JACK WOULD REACT! This is really good! I love how well portrayed Bunny, North and Jack all are, I think you captured there personalities perfectly! I also love your writing style. I would absolutely love to read the rest of this! I noticed you haven't updated this in, wow, 4 years, and I hope you do plan on continuing it! It's to good a story to abandon in my opinion. The whole, "And somehow they needed to fix the damage," makes it seem like you were planning on there being more than one chapter, and I hope I'm not being pushy or reading utter wrong way by assuming that- I don't mean any offence in any way, this story is perfect if you plan on it being a one-shot!

Yes thank you this is great!