I really should have known better.
Just because i was bored and browsed ff net a bit, i happened to come upon this story.
Even ignoring the typos and grammar in the Summary (i really should have known better), i started to read it, because reasons...
Sometimes i really hate myself.
You are publishing stuff here for quite some years now.
How come your spelling is still as atrocious as when you first started?
Reading a few of the reviews of any of your fics just confirms that.
I usually try to make constructive critics if i bother. But i guess there's no use here.
Don't really wanna flame anyone, but if your writing style literally causes headache i cannot help but be offended. (Didn't even get to read half this chapter before pain set in)
I bet if you wrote in your native language and just used google translate, your fics would be at least legible.
Why doesn't ff net have an option for ignoring stories from authors? You would be first on that list.
Please stop writing

where is the next chapter of this story please

hope you continue it soon enough, love the story

If he doesn't fuck all those girls who is inot him he is BETA MC. AND HE ALWAYS GETS HE'S ASS WHIPHED.

It's so cringy and corny lol but I'll keep reading until you ruin it with other Naruto characters

I been procrastinating reading to have a long read and I was not disappointed. Wow I can just imagine if Naruto's memory came during the event. Would hus trust for Minerva waver for this? He loved Fairy Tail to the point of feeling suicidal after he thought his friends were gone. Or would his new bonds cause an ultimatum for Naruto. I honestly can't wait for the next update.

Ya espero el próximo y que descubran a Naruto jajajajaja

What a crap of history, you're so bad, you shouldn't be writing this crap, this story is just rubbish

6 years and still this fic not finished. I'm not going to read it now because I hate being cliff hang but really look forward to reading it when it is one day completed.

How very interesting. (Says while stroking beard)

this story is a disappointment to the max . Naruto Fairy Tail crossover another worthless like all naruto harem stories from Fairy Tail. zero ntr and cheating. . Layla Heartfilia, Lucy Heartfilia, Irene Belserion and so on. You could at least give to a harem. why people don't write about them in the harem. Bang it, I never read more Fairy Tail garbage.

the end of the chapter was delicious. add ntr and it will be great

I have lost all faith in this particular story, the fact that you made Naruto miss very important years of his daughters lives and now when he he learns he will be all emo and negative of how sorry he is and if it doesn’t go that way then I honestly don’t know what the hell you are doing with this fic, while I love your other fics, sadly I will have to let this one go

Epic chapter keep it up!

What in the fuck did I just read?