i love your story keep writing it

I'm really interested! I love your description and detail, but I have a request. I know i'm only on the 5 th chapter and maybe it changes a little, but do you think you could add more dialogue? Because dialogue between the characters really helps me to understand it. if it changed later inthe story then i'm sorry. i love your fic tho!

Um, hey! I would read on, but I can't, not only due to the fact that I have a load of homework, but also because this fic really sucks. This is pure crap. Awful. (as quoted from your anonymous flamer. I think she put it well, don't you?) I mean, just the really in-depth and truely enchanting way you described the actions of Legolas was horrible. I mean, I could almost see his moves in my mind, so bad your descriptions were! And your originality... everyone hates originality around here! What about the ever so popular boring generic plot? This is horrible... you... must... conform!

lol, just teasin. You're a great writer. I can imagine this story coming out really well. Ciao, mon ami! :P

The storyline is getting more and more complicated. I especially liked the beginning of this chapter where his friend reflects on his meeting with Legolas.

Hope you'll write soon.

Greetings from Holland.

Fall-holidays!

*smirks*

Nice, very nice.

More please.

Am _

Oh, the plot thickens. Excellent chapter. I loved the background information on Legolas and Fathiel's relationship. I also like how you told it from Fathiel's point of view. So now they have to help the ice elf, maybe after they help him he will let them take Lilluil and lead them north? Oh well, obviously its not in my hands so i will eagerly await your next chapter.

So great you're writing once more.

Took me some time to get into the story again.

But it is great now that they've come into action. The development with the ice-elves intrigues. Hope you write more.

Greetings from Holland.

Oh, the plot thickens...that was excellent, now we are starting to get to the meat (the escape). Hopefully we can get a chapter in the next week or so right? :)~ Loved it

this is bloody brilliant D

great story

action, adventure, suspense, romance its got everything D

more please please please D

Am )

Sorry...I pressed the wrong button and I wanted to leave a note about chapter 36. I thought it was absolutely hillarious...they got captured by children (who are in fact the ice elves). Are they going to help them or turn them in? I have to admit I'm getting a little impatient for the story to pick up. Besides that I thought it was good (funny good).

You have no idea how happy I am to see a new post from you...I thought you had abandoned us...Hopefully it won't take that long for you to post the next chapter...Just a question:How many chapters does this story have?

Hope you'll write again soon.

I think I'll have to reread a bit.

Greetings from Holland.

You'd better keep writing!

very well written...i have to commend you on just how much information is held within your story..but written so a reader doesn't feel as though a text book is before them -..really!...some of the ideas are very ingenious...such as the rivalry between north and south...makes you wonder if yet another kindnap will happen if/when they get out of this mess!...the different magics is also a nice touch..i must admit at first i was hesitant to accept this fact..but as the story progressed it grew on me due to how it plays into the story

- and that last cliffhanger!...is it the older sister or..the escapies...hmm...guess ill know soon -

you updated! so sorry for not reviewing earlier, but i didn't even know you updated the story...i was only checking your bio, to see if were still alive when i saw you updated. oh well enough rambling and on with the review. the chapter was a little difficult to follow, maybe if you put a divider or something in between view-points, it would help the reader understand and continue with the flow. at some points i needed to reread the story in order to understand what was going on...ok, i'm a little confused on a few aspects (i have to go back and reread), here is the list: 1)Lilluil is at her fiance's house? 2)Did the northie elves escape? 3)Lilluil's father only now woke up right? Ok besides that i'm fine...can't wait till the escape