I wish you would come back to this story, so good

A shame you stopped writing this story

Good lord, everybody's hot. I have to say, exquisitely written. Dear lord.

holy shit man thank you. thank you for writing this. thank you for existing. god wow thanks for sharing. man I gotta tell ya I was in big trouble when i read this during my job meeting haha I had just so happen to begin the chapters with the. puddle inducing smut and damn I couldnt keep a straight face. Again thank you for taking the time to write this captivating story.

THIS IS SO BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN WOW

Really hoping this hasn't been abandoned.

I really need an update for this story and the cliffhanger is killing me. I'm interested to read Sherlock's reaction to discovering Melina is with his brother.

Cool! Is there another chapter for this story?

You kept the plot interesting till yet. Really. I loved the way your OC is able to handle Sherlock and the lemons are great too. But... Sherlock's possessiveness a bit too much. And I might sound crazy... but it odly suits as well.

This is his first love; he doesn't knows how to deal with these feelings... So, it's acceptable.

Please please please update! I loved the way you wrote it and the lemons are *ahem* great! Please continue!
Keep up the good work ;)

pretty good, just one little suggestion, the analysis of the protagonist feels like they are for the readers instead a person's actual thoughts, just the way you write is unrealistic, but otherwise it's pretty good.

Please update...anything! I'm begging you! It's been three years!

OMG. mel is awesome.

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So I've spent the better part of an evening just reading this story. I sincerely hope you'll pick it up again. I want to see Sherlock's reaction when she ends up in actual serious danger.

Mel is definitely a Mary sue I can't stand. Making through this chapter was utterly painful and I don't know if I'm able to read another chapter of this fanfic.