This is really good! Well done! Keep going!;)

I really like this, and especially the fullness of the characterization of Pizzazz. Not too crazy about Riot - he could still use a little more depth, but on the other hand the level of relationship among the Stingers makes a certain weird sense.

Thanks for a great story. I enjoyed that it was more mature than the story, as the fans of the show would be themselves by now. It was well written and, while I don't normally enjoy stories that switch POVs frequently, you pulled it off very well and I wasn't bothered in the least. I'm thoroughly impressed (though I accidentally read your sequel before this). Again, great job.

Aloha! Oh my gosh! i hope someone gets to Jerrica soon! I hope she lets synergy help her! I can't wait for more! I really enjoyed this chapter! I was feeling the same tension when Jerrica was forced to tell Rio the truth.

God bless

Aloha! I hope you're doing well. My name is Lauren. I LOVE your Jem story! It's truly outrageous! Seriously, it is! I've been reading it for a few days and I can't stop! I'm a huge fan of the music and the show. I grew up with it and I still watch it til this day! I'm really enjoying your story! I gasped right along with the other Holograms when Jem changed back into Jerrica while on stage. I never liked Eric or Tekrat much. One of my fave episodes is A Father Should Be. I'm definitely going to read more! I'm sorry I haven't reviewed until now. I've been sort of busy. But I'll be sure to review future chapters! I'm also going to check out any other Jem stories you've written. Your writing style is awesome!

God bless,

Lauren

Yeah they did get back together in the end. That Riot is well quite a riot and the misfits are still nuts. Good work on the story I liked it a lot.

Ah Eric is so nuts and has a real problem. I hope that her ear heals well after he violently ripped her earing off.

Ah the truth is out and Rio is very mad. Poor Jerrica has been kidnapped I hope she'll make it out alive.

Ah the mishap poor Jem to be so exposed like that. I wonder when zipper will make his move.

Ah the dastardly Eric is up to no good and Riot has noticed his behavior. What will happen now that it is getting closer to the event?

Ah more drama a little kissy face after work huh. At least she stopped him before it got to racy. I wonder if Rio is testing Jerrica just now, that's what I thought.

Ah poor Eric he is going nuts, first loosing the Misfits and the sudden realization of Jem's identity. Hope she can make it out of his plan okay.

Ah Eric proclaimed his love is still burning interesting. Nice chapter loved how the girls decided to manage themselves.

Ha ha ha that was funny miss Pizzazz's dream about Riot and how it was ruined. Good for the Misfits to wanting to dump Eric's lying ss.

Ah finally Rio connected the dots didn't he. I wonder how much longer that both of them can keep up the charade.