Lmfao. Fair play 2 jane against constances attitude. G'wan gal!

Oh my god. Am pissin myself laughing at this chapter! Seriously fudging epic!

your writing is impeccable.. loaded with so much detail, just beautiful!

Wonderful! Thank you!

wow that was a slow burn to a fiery inferno at the end, would have loved another chapter though;-)

I liked the story as a whole. I wasn’t crazy about the sudden end. It as low I was left hanging. But there were parts that were apsolutly great. Arkielad

WOW! WOW! Unbelievable. I loved it!
The plot was fantastic. Very intricate case for the romance to play off against. Well thought out.
The buildup and anticipation of the romance was very hot and clever. It kept me on the edge of my seat, eyes glued to the screen.
The story ended in the most perfect way. Leaving each reader the perfect opportunity to spin their own ending.

Yep, read this twice! Still hot!

I've tuned into this story after reading others you have posted. It doesn't disappoint! A cracking crimestory together with laugh out loud humour but always our ladies and THE most erotic passages. Totally hot! I loved it all. Thanks so much for sharing...

This was so wonderfully perfect! I was so sad to see it end. I wish there had been one more chapter! The needing seemed a bit abrupt.

I loved the teasing and arousing dance that Jane and Maura shared throughout this entire fic. It was funny and sexy and sensual and just so beautifully done! Thank you! This is definitely going into my favorites! :)

You have used the word "then" a couple of times when the word you actually need is "than". There is a huge difference between the two.

Then is used to situate actions in time. Than is used to make comparisons. For example, I went to the shops, and then cooked dinner. I would rather cook than do the dishes.

Okay so having given my little grammar lesson, I am loving your fic so far. You write fabulously and I can't wait to see how the story unfolds.

Cheers,
Grammar Nazi lol

Man... This was so fucking hot and so worth the slow build. Great job, well done, bravo!

I am impressed! I like your story and the last part...wow!

Just a little tip.. Don't eat fish if your partner doesn't. The horrible smell that comes out of one's mouth... Yuk!

You are a wonderful storyteller, but this particular story, though good ends rather abruptly. No matter how great a story is, if you leave your readers without closer they feel robbed. One more chapter to wrap this story up nicely would've made a difference from a good story to an excellent story.

I truly enjoyed the build up between Jane and Maura. The chemistry between them was truly amazing. And the sex was absolutely "out of this world"! WOW! I truly enjoyed every bit of this story, just wish there was some kind of fulfilling end.