Another lovely new chapter thanks ever so much

This is a fantastic idea. But there are a lot of mistakes such as spelling and grammar. There is also no explanation of what year it is. Has the war been has it not? Also there is no way Tonks would have been able to collect her as Tonks would have only been 5 or 6 years old at the time. It’s a great story but it needs a lot of work.

Vivement la suite

We want more
We want more!
:-)
Love the story!,
It's really good!
Just try to read it through before posting it,
There are a few mistakes in the spelling of some sentences.

Keep up the good work!
~Irene

Ugh, You need lessons with Grammar,Spelling and your chapters are dreadfully short its not story plot isn't good it has holes Hermoine is soooo OCC and I wish you never made this Voldermort is a HALF BLOOD THAT DOESNT MAKE HERMOINE A PUREBLOOD IT MAKES HER A HALFBLOOD DIMBO YOU MAKE SO MANY MISTAKES I GET TIRED OF READING THIS YOU SPELL NAMES WRONG AND DONT GIVE A SHIT LIKE WTF?!

Its Narcissa*not Narrissa

Hmmm interesting, I wonder what other changes Hermione will undergo. I enjoyed reading this.

Awww Fred and George are sweet gentlemen. I'm glad that they and Ginny accept Hermione as their own still. If Molly knew that Hermione was Bellatrix's daughter, why would she at first treat her as a daughter then turn her back on her?

Woo! That's one way to introduce a story. I like the um photo/cover of this story. This first chapter has caught my attention and I look forward to reading the rest and more.

love this chapter

I love this story, pls continue!

Just out of curiosity if Hermione is voldemorts daughter then is she part Harry's daughter because of the fact that they are part of each other

Ok im going to say please watch how you spell the names and words

Ok so I have a couple of comments to make. First, I absolutely love the story itself. I think that it's really fun because you twisted up the storyline in this not usual way (that's a compliment). Second, is based on the format... Specifically for when you are switching POVs. Make sure to write exactly who's perspective the story is being told in. Third is also about the format actually. So I am recommending that when you start a new scene I guess you could call it, you could maybe insert some sort of line, pattern or mark to show that it's a new scene. Fourth, and this is me being very picky, there are a few grammar errors. And just saying, I myself am very bad at grammar. OTHER THAN THOSE MINOR MISTAKES I LOVE IT! :) and plz don't kill or hate me. Just trying to help. :))))

The number one characteristic of any story is that it has be believable. It's very fresh that you have Bellatrix and Voldemort as her parents- I've never read a plot like that which is cool. But in order for the story to be believable there has to be some sort of tension as to how Hermione accepts this truth and right now so far in the story there is no tension which means it's not realistic or believable therefore, I'm not going to continue reading. But good job for writing it and sharing.