This is very nicely done, between Dean's melt-down, Sam's training injuries, John's intransigence with his sons, and finally, Bobby's concern for the young men left so precipitously at his home.

love it

I'm glad that Sam and Dean didn't have to worry about the O'Donnells hurting them, and that they let them live. They weren't hurting anyone, and the only reason that they kept Sam and Dean another night was because they 'tasted' so good! lol Of course they did! They are 'sweet' boys! ;P I guess the stop did Dean some good too, since he seemed to be better when they left Wonderland. It was a good little break for the boys. Bobby will make sure that Dean continues to get better and not let John make him feel too bad either.

Beautifully written! Loved it:)

What a sad story, that ended on a good note. Thanks for writing at such a hard time for you. Take care and I hope you find some peace.

Sorry about your mom, lost my dad last November and it sent me into depression as well. Strangely, I ended up writing a Winchester one shot to make me feel better as well. It helped.

And your muse looks like Dean Winchester? You lucky so and so! Mine looks like my freshman English lit teacher. She looked a lot like the shtriga in season one. Explains a lot doesn't it?

I'm sorry for your loss.

Thanks for the story! I liked it.

This is one of those stories that would make a great episode of the show.