I love this idea! I wasn't sure when you said the pronouns were vague, but I actually really enjoyed that decision. The statements truly fit for both and the vagueness conveys the similarities of their situation all the more. Well done!

I can just imagine this happening... very beautifully written - a great example of quality over quantity

Interesting character study. I enjoyed this.

Short but sweet- I like it! I like the way it is beautifully left to the readers imaginations :)

Awww, I really, really liked this! I liked how you kept it vague, I think that was really effective :)

Great job. Well done; very beautiful.

Lovely...moving...subtle...beautiful. A little work of art.

Nicely done.

Lol I was really happy to find this because my mom came up with this idea and wanted me to write it and I have too much on my plate as is. Great story! Enjoyed reading it!

this is so beautiful of i cant