Reviews for Thestrals |
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Guest chapter 1 . 5/24/2018 NICE |
luluhrh chapter 1 . 12/7/2014 wow. . . Draco totally deserves that beating. he's a jerk, through and through. |
Moonlight Cosmic Angel chapter 1 . 9/4/2014 awwww i wanted to read him kick his ass |
Queen Bovine chapter 1 . 10/14/2013 I like how the reason as to why the alchemists are at Hogwarts is only hinted at; for a oneshot of this size, a thorough explanation would only detract from the plot. I think there could have been more interaction between the various characters, but at the same time, it's too much like those particular Amestrians to keep to themselves. There is also an issue I have that is common through fanfiction, and especially, I've noticed, the Harry Potter fandom. There are too many excerpts from the book that could have been rewritten in your own worlds. Not an overt amount, but I am of the opinion that only the dialogue should be directly quoted when rewriting a scene |
Scaehime chapter 1 . 10/4/2013 Stupid this is not. Stupid you are not. Brilliant the more appropriate term is. Yoda I am not. God bless! |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/28/2013 Very good! I could see this happening if Ed, Al, and the Colonel did to to Hogwarts. ) Great job! |
BiblioMatsuri chapter 1 . 9/8/2013 Actually, this is interesting. Kind of plot-hole-y, though. And you nailed their characters. |
Mada-Scarpath chapter 1 . 8/19/2013 haha funny |
Riaru Takeru chapter 1 . 8/18/2013 Woah! Great story there! It was awesome! I was reading chapter 22 of Amaranthine, and went to the harry potterxfullmetal alchemist crossovers and saw this. This is awesome! |
OstensiblyInsane chapter 1 . 8/18/2013 Why would you make this complete? I wanna see him in trouble! |