Wow... Love Kirito and Asuna

It's s too good

Great! Loved reading this sweet and sexy story :) Thank you soo much for sharing :)

Damn thats pretty good

Really great wish they would have put that in the anime kosito x asuna ️

Holy crap that was infinitely better than chapter 16.5.

Good

It was a good/bad decision to read this only minutes after reading the last one. This is easily the hottest thing i've read in a while (detail is EVERYTHING in smut fanfics). But bad because I think my face is sponging up the majority of my blood and putting behind it some exceptionally bright lights aaaaand magically my pants flew off whilst in the processes of reading this steamy goodnessツPlease continue writing, and I'll continue readinggreat work!

can you make more?

U R THE BEST WRITER EVERRR

Awww sweet Lazy to and Asuna

The was you write them is perfect. It is so hard to find well-written lemon, especially with this pairing, and in your fics Kazuto and Asuna are in character while still being deliciously sexy.

Okay, I know it's been a while since this was posted. And at this point, I don't even know if you care to read these anymore. But if you still care about this, then please, for the love of all that is holy, make another "bonus-chapter" After reading both of your one-shots, I must say, you have created something beautiful.

The way you write Asuna and Kirito, is simply amazing. Even though Kirito might be a little OOC, that doesn't affect your story the slightest. I actually think it is for the better. This story was so well-written, I actually showed it to many of my classmates. And they loved it.

So please, as one fanfictionwriter to another, please make another chapter of this. It is so beautiful, it would be a shame to let it go at this point.

This is awesome !
Great work

It was so beautiful and exciting... Im... God! I cant think properly. It was... thanks!