My goodness, how did you /manage/ that. No es at all. And still such a good poem, wouldn't have noticed if you hadn't pointed it out. Wonderful and breathtaking and heart wrenching, as always, darling. Love your work! And I'm so glad that I found someone else that likes to do freeverse.

Good God... I'm seriously bawling right now. This is EXACTLY how I feel freeverse should be. You let the emotions all out on the page and there was no reason for anything else. This was so deep. Remus is a very sensitive person, vulnerable always, and you really captured that. The descriptions paint a very explicit image of hurt and guilt and pain, with longing for his other half, while somewhat loathing his need for him. The cutoffs were brilliantly done! Ugh, can't say enough. &hearts

Okay, you are so gifted I can't even explain it! Usually I don't read wolfstar because I'm an unwavering RemusTonks supporter, full stop, but this... I looked through the whole thing convinced that there must have been an "e" in there somewhere. Of course, I didn't, and that's just one more reason why this piece, and your work in general, is so skilful.
Excellent!

Perfection. There are not enough positive adjectives in any language on any world that could describe how amazing this, and everything else you write, is.