| Reviews for The Girl in Memory |
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  Guest chapter 32 . 1/15 Can you make a sequel to this? We never really got to see the romance between the two. I want to see them be a couple maybe pregnant or with some kids. Please consider a sequel. |
 Amzfundimental chapter 1 . 7/27/2018 omg hands down favourite Ari story ever... I LOVE IT! |
| njeha chapter 32 . 6/27/2018 I ADORE THIS STORY! you cannot believe how long I've been searching for a story about Ari Haswari, one where he isn't paired with Kate and isn't a One-Shot. So thank you so much! I'm so sad it's complete to be honest. Here's hoping for another Ari fic! |
| fictionalmike chapter 1 . 10/12/2017 An excellent AU story on the lines of "what if..." 32 chapters of excellence and a Spook taster in no. 33. |
| tash chapter 32 . 3/27/2016 i have reread both many many times! please finish the spooks edition! |
| Jowin28 chapter 32 . 2/29/2016 This is like a really good book that havent rea in a while. I just reread the whole thing again. Still an amazing story :-) |
| A thought is a spark chapter 12 . 1/21/2016 You keep switching povs in the middle of a section. It makes things confusing to read. You've done very well previously, by make a line between the pov changes. Still interesting read, not trying to flame, just give constructive criticism |
| A thought is a spark chapter 11 . 1/21/2016 In this time line, they don't know Ari's name yet. So Gibbs wouldn't be able to say that Ari has her. Besides that, it's a really good story so far. I can see improvement in your writing as I read farther. Just little things stick out, like small misspellings, or a word not in the sentence. I would suggest getting a beta, because that always helps for the small errors that everyone makes |
| lilyjen09 chapter 23 . 12/17/2015 Your story is so awesome! This chapter made me get teary eyed. (Oh, and I totally love the name Ziva... but I don't know if I could use it... I don't want my kid to be an assassin! lol I love Ziva, she's my favorite... the episodes without her are just not the same. Although I thought Kate was cool too... |
| amberlovescsi chapter 24 . 8/13/2015 omg I love you. bit of sherlock right there with the messages |
| amberlovescsi chapter 23 . 8/13/2015 that end bit has left me in tears ! |
| knuffelmuff chapter 21 . 7/4/2015 Who's Ana in Evie's flashback? |
| knuffelmuff chapter 11 . 7/3/2015 We talked about chloroform in toxi and I'm pretty sure it takes up to a few minutes for the victim to react... |
| BetterYouDieThanI chapter 31 . 5/2/2015 I don't know if you will see this, but if you do this story is AMAZING. I can't think of any other wordsto describe it. The characters are written perfectly. They aren't out of character and I love your writing. This is my favorite NCIS fanfiction that I have ever read. |
| BetterYouDieThanI chapter 21 . 5/2/2015 Love Ari and Evelyn/Kelly! |
