| Reviews for He's Got A Secret |
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Oh duck chapter 5 . 6/23 FUCK KAKASHI FRICKEN WATCHED THAT. OH FUCK |
Trace Reading chapter 3 . 4/14 What's with all the Genome soldiers? ...no, yes, I know that manga writers frequently insert single exclamation points so as to denote shock or surprise (as if characters don't have faces which can express those emotions!) but the point is don't do that. |
lara5170 chapter 12 . 2/24 I am confused about this story. Naruto actually seems even worse as a female. Everyone treats her like crap and nobody was surprised that he is suddenly a female? |
emowoods205 chapter 1 . 10/20/2019 It's just like the anime interesting, I wonder what will happen when Naruto meets Sasuke! |
MysticRising chapter 1 . 7/24/2019 Yes! I got this idea that along with high longevity uzumaki's have vitality and virility to the point that some males can give birth and release powerful pheromones. I like the omega verse (sometimes) but I really want to see a single omega in the world (that being naruto) so explaining it as a bloodline but not a kekei genkai makes perfect sense! |
bookworm51485 chapter 12 . 5/30/2019 This is a bit all over the place, it doesn't feel like there's an actual plan. It's just being made up as it goes along, which creates a lot of inconsistencies. For instance, Naruto seems to have gone from male to a hermaphrodite to female without ANYONE blinking an eye. "Oh, Naruto's a girl now. Okay *shrugs*" There's not reaction by anyone to him just randomly deciding to call himself a girl and dress like one. Even the original introduction of Naruto as a hermaphrodite was odd. His henge is tied to his headband (Huh? Why? That makes no sense) and when it lifts, he's half naked. Oh and he randomly has a scent that turns people on. At least in this one moment. Then it's gone for the rest of the story... This is all over the place. In all honesty, I truly thought this story was being written by someone much younger. |
desacori chapter 36 . 3/9/2019 Please keep writing love this story |
inuyasha16451 chapter 36 . 1/26/2019 Omg. That story was bloody amazing. I can’t wait to read the sequel. |
Gabby-Hunter chapter 36 . 1/18/2019 I can not wait for the sequel I can tell, it will be great. Just like this one |
Melyway chapter 36 . 1/6/2019 What happens next? |
Guest chapter 36 . 1/6/2019 Kill yourself, virgin fag. |
dark blue princess chapter 36 . 1/6/2019 See you soon, milady! |
cassiejones07 chapter 36 . 1/6/2019 I did not mean to come off as and patient however I do rather enjoy this story and you did almost go solid year without an update. I'm glad you finally got into the mpreg start and I can't wait for the second Arc of the story it's always a delight but yes this is my favorite chapter so far! so keep up the good work! |
Melyway chapter 35 . 12/23/2018 Wow! |
dark blue princess chapter 35 . 12/24/2018 Well, here’s to a new start! |