So sweet Grace sharing her dad with Steve. Then funny Danny laying the "dad" bit up to Steve.

Well written so far but your Danny is very out of character. No way would he leave an injured person behind to fend for himself, Super seal or not.

Liked the idea of Grace sharing her dad with Steve...several funny and sweet moments throughout the story. Nice job!

Very good story! You are a great story writer.

Truly loved it! T

Love it. Love Danny as super dad. They are one big family. Really love your story. Thank you.

Nice story. Really liked the ending.

Excellent descriptions of the physical. Great flow; could just picture it all.

"You see, Uncle Steve is sad because he misses his dad, cos he's gone to heaven and it would be his Dad's birthday this week. So I told him that I know you are his best friend but he could also borrow you as his dad if he wanted, I'll share."
So..what..are you trying to make me cry? : ) That was just too sweet...
This was a good story..and well written..And I just love anytime I can read about Grace and Steve's relationship.
Thanks for posting..

Great story!

A simple short story that packed quite an emotional wallop. You did a wonderful job.

for a first story you did good, wish i could do it, please write more

So funny with Steve calling Danny Pop. They are exactly the same age in real life. One of them is one day older than the other. I can't remember which one.

Great story, hope you're gonna write more ;-)

I hope you’ll have more for us?