Great story

I love this story and enjoy coming back to read it periodically. I like how you show the dichotomy between Dumbledore's expectations and what is actually happening. I also enjoy your idea of the Lestrange attack on the Longbottoms being revenge. I haven't seen anything like that in any other story.

This story was fantastic. Thank you for writing and sharing.

This story was so unique... while the writing itself could use some work, the story telling was pretty, the culture well thought-out, and characterizations consistent. That the prophecy was still fulfilled, with Harry defeating the Dark Lord Dumbledore as opposed to the Dark Lord Voldemort.

I think that my favorite part of this fic was Voldemort and Harry's brotherhood. I really wish that could have been showcased a bit more in depth. Rather, I wish that the two of them could have been codependent but independent, if that makes sense? I would have loved to see Harry with an agenda or plotline separate from the court intrigue. Or even to see Harry standing beside Tom more like an equal than a possession. However, I understand that the magic involved with their relationship kind of prevents that.

I really like it a lot!

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It would be shocking if this fanfict actually turned out to be one where the horcruxes' do not over-throw the master soul.

Wow! What a story! So totally different from anything else I've ever read but very, very good.

thank you for writing, loved that Hermione is gonna be a ninja. did not see that coming

I don't know why but that last sentence got to me

this is so good i love it every single chapter

Hi! I just wanted to ask...are you French? I just wanted to ask because at tbe beginning of Ch. 16 you said "He will parle with me..." and if I remember correctly parle means talk in French. So, if that was an accident, awesome!

good story

An interesting story! Love how you write the Harry/Tom relationship without romantic connotations.

I just wanted to say thank you for this story. I sobbed so hard at the end in how beautifully you wrote how yes Harry is scared but he still had Tom and that they would still be together and that Sirius knew. Thank you for the beautiful story and I only hope that one day I will have suck a wonderful companionship that Harry and Tom share. Thank you again for the story and with best of wishes.