Great story, very much enjoyed it :)

brilliant

I don't even know where to start reviewing on this, because you already know how much I adore it. I think I might have to stand by saying that it is potentially one of my favourites! The light-hearted drama of the beginning was just enough to prove to Virgil that things could never go that smoothly, and then something like that happens!

I love their reactions the whole way through it, but it's the banter between the brothers that is the best, especially between Scott and Virg at the beginning there and the way they are just rubbing off each other. Such a sibling-y thing to do.

And then Jeff slips down the step and neither Virgil nor John have a good enough reason to claim that Scott is wrong preparing for one of them to come back hurt. And the final lines just sums up everything we love about the Tracys!

A truly awesome story, I love it!

aww wow what a great little story well not really little but still great.

I loved this it was so good. Loved the joking about all the misadventures, Scott really set himself up there but go him playing the big hero. My nan and her stick are just as dangerous hee hee.

When he picked those pills I was thinking I've got a funny feeling about this and then when he keeled over I knew it was sleeping pills oopsy.

so good with lots of funny moments. can't wait to see what you come up with next.

I LOVE THIS STORY. It was so exciting as I knew it was building up to some catastrophie. Very nice relationships between the characters and excellent structure. Can't wait for your next story. Hope it won't be too long.

This is awesome! Grandma chasing after Scott and/or the other boys is such a funny image! Scott, the USAF/Thunderbird pilot supreme falling asleep at the wheel, er, controls?! Poor Grandma, though, when she realizes that Scott had taken her sleeping pills by accident. So glad everything worked out alright in the end. It's nice that she's recovered from her hip surgery and will be back taking care of her family on the Island again. That family wouldn't have been who they are without her. Lovely, lovely story, Bee!

Loved the story - very nicely done! :)

This was fun! Good for Grandma, being back on her feet and "In fighting form." It was nice of Scott to step in against that ruffian but Really, she could have done it herself, thank you very much! Gotta LOVE that lady! Now everyone is back home and the family business goes on. ( Don't think I haven't been watching to see how you were going to continue after "Broken". Very well handled Bee.) It was great to see Scott have to be rescued for once. And Heaven forbid Virgil miss out on cake! On Tracy Island, life is good once again.

Sounds a lot like something which had happened in one of the dorms I had been staying in while at boarding school. :-)

Loved it bee. Found it really funny but put a big smile on my face. Yes I did think it was going to be another mility chapter story lol. Poor Scott but on the upside he can join his brothers knowing that he is not so perfect lol. Well do missy xxx