| Reviews for The First Namikaze |
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  Mario chapter 28 . 7/17 PLEASE CONTINUE! |
| Athena chapter 28 . 6/7 It is a good fanfic. I can't wait for the next chapter! -.- |
 darkimortal chapter 3 . 5/20 The scene with his mothers death was forced. It was way too dumb, also you keep messing up there were at least two times so far when his dad was alive that Naruto was learning Taijutsu katas then he meets M and H then he knows nothing. These new foes he's fighting that overpowered him was garbage, he has so much Chakra that him being bound makes no sense |
| radTWITCH chapter 3 . 5/13 The character interactions in this are crap, the conversations are so awkwardly put together no one acts as these people do. |
| radTWITCH chapter 2 . 5/13 The interactions between Naruto, Hashirama, and Madara was really strange. I hope he gets his memories back at some point, because the whole time-travel thing seems kinda pointless without them, its just an OC in the clan era. |
| reynardgautama chapter 28 . 4/23 Great and interesting story |
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/9 This is a militaristic, war-torn era. I think a lot of character development was rushed/skipped with how abruptly the sister of the clan head one of the two biggest clans just turned her back to her family/clan/military commander for some storybook hero. Treason is not a light subject. |
| StoneTheLoner chapter 1 . 2/2 I'm not sure I liked all these weird twists |
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/28/2019 yall really had to kill naruto's mom like that |
| redHussar chapter 1 . 12/18/2019 After the first mention of lost memories I'm out. It's not time-travel if it's a twin that moves to another place and time. I don't appreciate lies. |
| shineottoko chapter 28 . 12/12/2019 I have read this one since the original version and it was interesting but the chapters difference is over 40 chapters in the original one to over 20 chapters in the second one and near 30 chapters in this one but I really like this so waiting for the next chapters. |
| Aetherium21 chapter 10 . 12/4/2019 Idiot, Naruto why are you bantering with him knowing what Shinobi of this era are like |
| Guest chapter 7 . 10/8/2019 Your story is very well paced and i am enjoying it very much. There are many parts that i loved and enjoyed specially the Naruto introduction to senju and uchiha clans. If u could make Naruto a bit more stronger than he already is because I cannot see him defeating madra or hashirama as he is now. Please do not stop posting the chapters. |
| Guest chapter 28 . 9/24/2019 I wish you would continue this story as it is clearly one of the best fanfic present! |
| Tengoku no Kotei chapter 28 . 9/22/2019 You crazy shit! |
