Hey man great job there

awesome

The story is leggit so far,you have to continue,pleaseee.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE TO WRITE MORE AND UPDATE THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON

This is an amazing story so far. Please don't quit now. Who is the mystery judge? How will Sam, Alex, and Clover react to finding out Peter's secret? Please come back and continue the story. I beg of you.

The story has the occasional minor spelling mistake and some of the dialogue feels...off. But this is decent overall fanfic, and it would be nice to see it being continued.

Update this story please.

Please continue this story, I would love to see more...

- Bran

Magnificent chapter can't wait for more please update soon

Dude, I want to see the next part! Let's see it! NEXT PART NOW!

And then what happens next? Please don't stop! I want to see what happens after this!

Please please please come back! Don't stop now! This story is great so far! I want to see how the girls and Spider-Man work together. What will happen next? Please continue the story! I beg of you.

Please don't quit now! I want to see what happens next. Who is the mystery judge and what will happen after that? Please continue on with the story. I have to know what happens next!

good story so far. I have one question though: When will you post the next chapter?

Well I only just found this but it's interesting so far. I noticed that the pairing is only with Sam and Clover, personally I think Alex is a much better fit than Clover as Clover is the type that Peter has never been seen dating before. I do hope you add in Alex to the romantic plot in the story given she would be more interested in his physical abilities.

I'm kind of wondering why you made them this young, I would have made it like their second years as spies or senior maybe if not college but that's just me.

I'm also surprised you didn't have Peter comment on what they were wearing while 'jogging'. Could have had one of the girls for instance just say they were new suits for jogging or something to BS their way through the scene.

Some scenes though feel more like exposition then actually telling the story, like you're just rushing through them like with the kid in the fire in this chapter. there was no actual dialogue for instance, no real point of view and felt very stiff. Try to avoid that in the future as it's not like there's a limit to how much you can put in a chapter to take advantage of that and don't be afraid to explore scenes a bit more at times.

Overall it is an interesting story and I do hope to see more of this.