| Reviews for Mr Rich Boy |
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HijabiGirlForever786 chapter 1 . 1/19/2014 I love this story :'), #AnotherAddiction lol xD. Update soon :D xx. |
Fienna chapter 1 . 8/21/2013 (Lol I read this a couple of days ago but i think I forgot to review, sorry!) I got a sudden urge to try out high heels when while reading this, but then I remembered that I'm too young to and I'd break my ankles wearing those things... Wohoo, anyways, I'm enjoying this a LOT already, I imagine Suigetsu's voice to be the the voice of a hillbilly stoner for some extremely dumb reason... I'm all brain wtf is wrong with you |
image of nothing chapter 1 . 8/19/2013 Hello. I'm just gonna say, that I am in love with your writing style. It's very good in this fic. This story intrigues me. Not so much because of the romance, but the promise of mystery, and suspense. Also, while I don't like non-ninja stories, I can look pass that, in favor of giving the characters guns. Some danger is a must, with me. ...Gaara came the frick outta nowhere. I just think the revelation of them being related, should have maybe waited till you could give it more attention... But hey! It's whatever, you want. Bye** |
sasuke140 chapter 1 . 8/18/2013 It seems amazing so far |
friday nights chapter 1 . 8/17/2013 This is gorgeous! I love it |
plutonyan chapter 1 . 8/17/2013 Hope you update soon! You got me hooked! Hahaha! :) |
SMILE chapter 1 . 8/17/2013 Please update soon! I love this story already, can't wait for more :) |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/17/2013 Fantastic |
SkeletoNQueeN06 chapter 1 . 8/17/2013 oooo.. nice start... |
ILoveSxS chapter 1 . 8/16/2013 I really like this one |
stuckinwonderland420 chapter 1 . 8/16/2013 Aaaah! YAY new story! XD I really like the start of this one, especially be because the beginning was so mysterious! I feel like the story is going to be Saluta with her normal life, Sasu-chan popping up every now and then, and just the right amount if action and romance, ne? I think the whole "running from the serial killer" thing will give the story a really interesting twist! Can't wait fir the next update! XD -Poppy |
appabend chapter 1 . 8/16/2013 Urgh... I learned the hard way to introduce a story by a really long prologue. I shouldn't have done that. But an epic introduction is much better than a boring one, which what my story currently suffered from IMO. But anyway, amazing writing, interesting story, amazing chemistry, interesting characters, the narrative kind of confusing at times even after re-reading one part for like 3 times. And Gaara popped out of nowhere. It surprised me so hard I swear to god I was hitting the back of my cupboard and my camcorder's packaging box fell down to my head. No Seriously... that actually happened. :D :D :D [A-] |
lilithkiss chapter 1 . 8/16/2013 HAHASJHSDHAkjdlfkjf! You really did pulled up a 6k words chapter in a single day. Wow. That's amazing. Thanks for the fic girl, now I'll begin my review First of all, great title. Simple and eye catching. I love it. Very well written chapter, I could visualised it while I was reading it. I love sakura's personality, she's tough and she's funny too, in the ironic/sarcastic way. Perfect. I must confess I have a few doubts, like, who was sakura running away from? Or why did sasuke and the rest had guns on them? are they mobsters or something? I guess all these doubts will be revealed in the next chapters... This really looks promising. I'll patiently wait for the update. Thanks again. |
emosaku chapter 1 . 8/16/2013 I love this!I just hope Sakura actually stays tough in this one |