Going to cry...!

Wow, that got intense! Poor Leo, this sounds exactly like something he would do :(

MY BABEH! BABEH LEO! His brothers have killed him inside!
I love this story! It's so emotional and it hardly had any dialogue, either! Love it love it love it!

I love the story line of Leo protecting his brothers and just being full of pain from it.

wow intenso

That... Was Amazing 3 :3

NOOO! * Sobs loudly at the sad beautifulness of the story* That was an awesome yet heart wrenching fic bro! You should continue! For real, it's good.

Scars memories of past failures, bruises reminders to be better, what a great line to summarize Leo's point of view. This one shot brilliantly portrays Leo's self sacrificing nature to protect his brothers. Bravo!

Poor Leo! A brilliant one shot. Good job in writing this.

What an excellent character study. Well done! Start to finish, a most satisfying read!

Ok, that was just so sad.. Honestly, there were tears in my eyes when I read that last part! God, the burden of being the leader... Raph should help him with it, not make it worse! Frag, all the emotions were so clearly written that even I felt them over here! If you think I'm over exaggerating ask my sister beside me who's looking at me like 'what the hell's wrong with you?' Seriously, I love ya AND your awesome stories! :D

Lovely let tragic. They have one messed up turtle. Will be hard to understand and mend him after so long.

I like it

Awwwwwwwwwwwww

Could you please make this into a two-shot! It's soooo good!