This is really neat. Is it weird that I want Denman to come back as a villain again? I just wanna see her get her a*s handed to her.

ta daaaaaaaa!

Hi, Catdragon! It's been already a year since your story update. If you have no more good ideas for it, how about one or two more chapters to make the story complete? I hate when good story is no more contunued. Kind regards, fanfiction reader :)

Omg

Oh no ¡!

Isnt she afraid that another person knows that shes a mermaid? Like srsly?! Didnt it come to her mind that the guy could tattle and shed be experimented on?! Its making me angry

I hope to god you continue this soon

Yay, you updated! I'm so happy right now! :)

Ooh, so Wise somehow has some of Jacqueline's powers? How did he get them? Or is he somehow a merman now?

Keep up the amazing work,
MrsDalek

i just glad for an update :D

Wow more and more merfolk are popping up!

Liking the training, hoping Jack doesn't run into trouble too quickly.

Hope this job offer doesn't come and blow up in her face, and that she keeps refusing to let Fury control her. If you do the Winter Soldier plot does that mean when all of S.H.I.E.L.D's files are released everyone will know about mermaids? Because that will be utter chaos!

Liking the lead up for Winter Soldier and am interested to how you'll have Jack in the story. Can't wait to read more on how the talk with Fury goes.

Nice to just read a calming chapter about what happens after the big battle, and glad Jack is recovering ok.

Hehe, loved the battle and Jack remarking how she has no idea how they'll get this sorted out, but will ask tony once he's finished kissing. Also like the change with Tony not blowing up the suits.