This is so good! I need more desperately!

I would get down on my hands and knees and beg you for a fourth chapter if I thought it might make a difference. This is a whole different kind of amazing. I love it. So much. I might just have to add it to my favorites because these three tantalizing chapters were damn incredible.

I almost want to cry because there's no more to read. You did beautifully.

I really like your story it's really good I think you should continue! I hope the smokescreen becomes sierras partner!

This is a nice story. _

I hope you continue it sometime.

I like this story. Is there ever going to be a new chapter?

Keep going I love it

I like where you're going with this. In my opinion, Sierra's character didn't get expanded upon in the series as much as I hoped she would, so this was a pleasant surprise to find. :)

Oh Smokescreen, lovable in his own way. When he started playing the music, all I could think of was that scene in Avengers where Iron Man shows up in Germany. I love how you're classifying Predacons by mythology! I wish the show would do that, actually.

I love the story you're building! It sounds like you put some serious thought into the world of the refugees, and I really like how you've fleshed out the character of Sierra. Also, you made an "X-Files" reference. That is awesome.

Beautiful weaving of classic Greek mythology into your tale and the head-cannon. I got shivers when Smokescreen said, "Makes you wonder..." and then used that information against them. A perfect example of how the mech thinks on his feet. You do have a skill for capturing the characters.
I find myself wondering what could possible be the use of this attack. It seems oddly both very deliberate and random at the same time.
The combat scenes were well done. I could follow them easily and "see" what was going on in the chaos.
Looking forward to the next chapter.

Ooh, love mythology reference. Please let there be more of them. I love the thought of a monster hunting. And Smokescreen with Sierra...a great team! I was reminded of Jazz there with the speakers going on top volume. I also like how Sierra is a real person, with how she constantly is hiding herself from others and is still thinking of that poor guy who died.

gigantic birds... birdemic? really?

Finally, the action's starting! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

Seems really great.

This actually looks interesting. Will be waiting to read more :)