Reviews for The shopping trip
indanthrene-gecko chapter 6 . 6/20/2017
You know,you could add another chapter if you want. Snape realizes he forgot to get Potter pajamas. Or, for winter hols, he gets mittens and snowgear for the harsh baltic winters. I liked it. I liked Snape's glee at an embarrassed Harry. I liked Snape and the mothers they passed. Good work.
Larenars chapter 6 . 6/19/2016
I love your stories. Your characterization of Snapes is awesome. Thanks for sharing.
Guest chapter 6 . 3/4/2016
I can just agree with BeholdTheMetatron1946 :D Wonderful!
RainCityWriter chapter 6 . 4/5/2015
I loved the tone of this story
Pepperonyfan1982 chapter 6 . 3/7/2015
would you consider writing a sequel to this? something where Harry gets revenge involving bats, catnip and shrinking undershorts (belonging to Dumbledore) this is hilarious...
Guest chapter 6 . 9/13/2014
This story really is a moodlifter )
Guest chapter 5 . 9/13/2014
"And just for the fun of it he nodded amiably at an harrassed-looking Muggle-mother"
That one had me howling with laughter )
Guest chapter 6 . 9/10/2014
Couldn't stop grinning. That was wonderful. I really like your writing. Keep going :-)
TaleweaverNLM chapter 6 . 11/7/2013
severus:-is smirking smugly-
-is giggling but petting a kitty harry comfortingly-
remus/serius:-glaring at snape-
DearlyFictitious chapter 6 . 9/30/2013
This was HILARIOUS! XD

Oh man, even I turned red for poor Harry!
0Harry.J.Potter0 chapter 6 . 9/18/2013
Great fun story. 5 stars
Moi chapter 6 . 9/16/2013
This kinda calls for a sequel. *shaking with laughter* Poor Harry.
Guest chapter 6 . 9/11/2013
Perfect Story!
Rebecca chapter 6 . 9/11/2013
It could use some editing (a good portion of your punctuation was either missing or wrong) but it was an enjoyable read.
Guest chapter 6 . 9/11/2013
I like how you tried to do something different !

I will also look forward to anything else that you may do !

The Crimson Mage.
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