what an amazing story! I know it's been almost two years but please think about coming back to it. We'd all love to read more chapters!

I know it has been some time since this updated but I feel the need to leave a reply anyway.

You have a real talent here. Our beloved characters may be very oc, but they are in a way that makes actual sense. It's amazing! I have not read many stories where the author could do that.

Thank you very much for sharing your work with us, and I hope that one day you will continue. I'll be there the second you do.

Greetings from Germany,
Emi

Please come back to this. I absolutely enjoyed this and would love to see more

that's a really nice story...i love it. but -in fact i'm a german- i think 'Der Erlkönig' is a ballad not a poem. Right? We just read it in our German lessons

Thank you so much for the update. i love your story so much

yaaaaaaaaaaassssss I WAS WAITING FOR YOU TO UPLOAD MY FRIEND

I was SO happy when I found out that you'd uploaded a new chapter! I practically jumped out of my skin!

I love this story so much, it's very creative and I love the way it deals with the four main characters from different angles. I love seeing an older and different Jane and Michael, the change in Mary in Bert is very interesting and I'm very interested in their relationship.

Keep up the great work and I hope you update soon! :) x

beaming to see a new chapterthis story is so well-written, and so intriguing ! xx

I absolutely adore this story - fantastic work! I really hope you update soon, but please take your time and don't feel that you have to rush! :) x

OMG please update soon

This is an amazing story I would love to read more!

Another fantastic chapter! I am dying to know where all the sweets came from and what happened between Mary and Bert :) Keep writing, you're such a superstar! Hope you had a lovely Christmas and have a Happy New Year!
Kelly xx

Excited to see another update!
Personal anecdote, but the silent night portion reminds me of singing that song with my German grandmother so that was nice.
I can't wait to read more, but I understand you wanting to plan it all out, so no rush.
- Jillian xx

Yay! I'm so glad you decided to update this :D it is a fantastic story and I can't wait for the next chapter! A very Merry Christmas to you x

I love this story so much, its honestly amazing :) you should be proud of yourself for creating it!