I just found your story. It was amazing. It had all the good points (Ivy/ Rachael) that the original did not.
I'm sorry you don't have the time or inclination to finish what I know would have been an excellent story.
Maybe in the future you may decide to give it another try.
I know it would be worth the wait.

More please!

This is a very good story!

please update
i love it
ivy and rachel forever

I would like to see more of this story. I hope you haven't lost interest in it.

Looking forward to seeing what happens next! I'd suggest next time you borrow a scene from the books that you work on changing the wording a bit so it's not an exact quotation.

I seem to have missed the part where Ivy indicated she didn't like working for the IS.

So Bis is the size of a dvd but Rachel puts her hands on his shoulders?

hi
You are writing a great story, I like your changes to the Hollows. The rough and gray Rachel is really cool. Now when Rachel from becoming a werewolf will have its own set of instincts and therefore could better understand the Ivy.
Rachel read just about bites people, but Rachel has become a werewolf thanks to some magic gift what's the difference?
she will be able to retain at least part of the mind in the form of a wolf? Rachel is the red wolf? improve the Rachel's hearing? I look forward to a new chapter

Great story. Plz keep updating. It seems u r in contact with agmartin40. Pls ask her on bhalf of all her fans to update million gifted babies.

Nice I have a feeling that Rachel is going to be in trouble with Ivy!

Can't wait for the next chapter

nice chapter :)

Update soon i'm biggining to enjoy this story...

Love the chapter, any chance we can get a update any time soon?

Took a me a minute to realize how you were reenacting the actual scene in the book while altering some of it but it was good! Like REALY good like Oh my god why couldn't that have actually happened in the book good!
So great job!

wow excellent tense chapter