I love this story! Ow... It very very amazing! Can you update soon please!

I really wish this story would continue, really amazing!

I really like this chapter. It reminds me of when my friends in highschool had a party to celebrate when one of our friends who got a concussion from playing soccer finally came back recovered from the hospital. He wasnt in a coma, but you get the idea. One idea that I have is to kind of bring Waternoose into the plot some how. Kind of like the role that Professor Callaghan played in Big Hero 6. I mean of corse his true motives are revealed in Monsters Inc, but maybe have him working on behind the scenes, maybe explain how Sully and Mike got his attention during scare tryouts, or maybe have some unknown monster who knows kids are not toxic maybe leave some clues for others to start to suspect things about the factory and the rolling in black outs, which might lead to some attempted investigating or talks with Pyapi (who might also know some things)? I don't know, it's just some plot ideas if anything. I know a lot of people have said this, but this really is a great story so far. It's definitely a lot longer and more intrequite than anything I've written. Keep up the great work you're doing.

My birthday is December 6th too!

I absolutely love how you portray all the characters and their relationships and interactions with one another. Also I absolutely adore your interpretation of Archie. I can't wait to read more!

I can't wait to find out what happens next. Hope you update soon!

I really enjoy you shipping Dirk and Violet, I really do, but if you don't mind me asking, what kind of accent is it that you imagine Violet speaks with? Because it's really gonna bother me if I don't know.

I agree with my sister about the chapter. We hope you enjoy your trip to Asia. So many nice events happen to the heroes. Along with one getting in trouble with the trolls for breaking the rules. Terry and Terri will be so great in the Scare Games. The intern reporter is so polite. Dot would've burped like her team if she had been at the OK dinner. It's kind of a surprise that Monnie's burp was so quiet. Laura and Squishy's mom were even louder than Sulley. Squishy better tell Laura how he feels before it's too late. It's so sad the leader of the trolls is angry at student Nadya right now.

This was definitely worth waiting for. I'm just glad you're feeling better emotionally. Terry and Terri are being so strong now. They were able to handle an interview from an intern for crying out loud. Colette and George are so cute together. Percy of JOX is just asking for trouble. Dot should've been with her team when they went to OK's dinner. The burping both teams do is so funny. Colette was such a surprise. But not as much as Laura and Squishy's mom. Hopefully Squishy will be brave enough to tell Laura about his feelings. I hope the problems with the trolls can be fixed very soon.

My favorite part of this chapter was the burping contest. HA! It's so adorable to see those guys and girls get along so well, even if they do have some relatively bad manners. I also enjoy how Mike is catching up with Squishy's crush on Laura, and that he's trying to help build up his confidence.

Though, I'm gonna be honest, the whole "troll" subplot is a little... out of genre for this type of fic (and MU in general for that matter). Still, Nadya and Carrie's friendship is very sweet.

TROLLS!

Loving this! :D Can't wait for more!

I really love your story! I really hope you have Terry change his tune soon and warm up to Naomi. I mean, it's heartbreaking seeing them like this.

Here's how the PNK's outfits are like
Carrie:Rebecca Bloomwood Naomi:Blair Waldorf Britney:Carrie Bradshaw
Taylor:Georgina Sparks Crystal:Andy Sachs Heather:Charlotte York

Laura. Why are you doing this? Not just to your friends but to yourself? I get that some people want to be left alone but this is starting to get ridiculous (though I do feel bad for her when her sorority meeting becomes problematic).

At first, I thought Jane was going to be another OC, but when read the trivia her Dirk's bio on Pixar Wikia and it mentioned that he had a sister, that's when I became convinced.

I also feel bad for Squishy and Carrie. Squishy still can't get to properly talk to Laura and nothing really seems to go right for Carrie in regard to Noami.