This was a fantastic read well done

Hey there, Lifa here
Just want to say this is a great story
Please try to update ASAP.

( insert praise here ) why you have to go leave it on a cliff hanger like that? Dammit dude hurry up and update already :(

p.s is the traitor one of the advisers? out of all the people so far that seems the most likely.

This was a great chapter. please keep up the great work and please update soon.

A very good story.
It will be awesome if you could update it

nice can't wait to read more

love it

Good chapter and quite descriptive as well, and enjoyed reading the cute moments between Ichigo and Katara. And i like how the earth kingdom is now proposing under Ichigo's fair rule. Look forward to see how the battle against the rebels will be fought. And the writing and the quality of the chapter is top notch.

man you really like to make ichigo violent, ahh well good as always and your grammar is improving. alittle advice i was givin in high school when it came to writeing was to try not to repeat the same word more the once in a paragraph (you say king like 5 times in a row) word has a thesaurus take advantage trust me it helps.

The past 2 chapters were to boring for my taste plus the characters are way to old for my liking and the fact Ichigo could be hurt by bender when his is the next Spirit King pissed me off but also makes this a disgrace to how powerful Ichigo really is.

This isn't a flame, it is just me explaining my reasons for disliking the story instead of just flat out being an asshole.

Cool! Ichigo sure has changed a lot of things since becoming king! And awesome, he's modeled a bit after the Crimson King with even the title of it. And his son Kyo! Very nice! And lol, looks like even he and his son are fearful of Katara's motherly wrath!

Looking forward to the next chapter, man!

This story is great so far although I think you tend to try and extend the descriptive scenes just a little too much. But then again others might like it and it's your story. In the beginning you also kept saying sixteen years so many times when it may have been unnecessary and again it is your story and it's brilliant so far if not for the slight spelling errors that you have missed during editing perhaps

very good i really hope you keep writing this story

Ichigo, a king? Ichigo, killing people willingly? What?

Good job on the whole, a few spelling and grammer mistakes here and there but a very interesting concept. Although if I'm honest I think Toph would have been a better choice than Katara pairing wise especially since Ichigo's now the Earth King (nice touch by the way) but that's just an insignificant personal gripe. I'm enjoying it as I do all your works so thank you for writing.