Kawaaiii

Lots of decent dialogue here too

Another sweet chapter

Off to a good start

love it

Lucy dominating erza is my new fetish!

I find it extremely annoying when Erza is the only one with other girls interested in her, and Lucy keeps on having to get jealous. Why cant Erza ever get jealous? whelp no point in saying that now since you are finished

i wish Lucy won against Erza, that would have been awesome

LOL just realized this was rated T and had a lemon scene you're a savage

PLEASEE MAKE CANA MIRA LEMON IN HERE (chap 15-6) plsssss I'll continue but I hope to see more of EM ;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;(triggered btw)

It's good AND AWESOME (I'm new here get me some slack xD) but I see like 3 chapters now without Cana Mira (I don't really ship EM but staring) and they weren't really "chapters" all I could see was Lucy Lucy Lucy (not a big fan of hers ) anyways I will now read chapter 9 of this story PLS be Cana there and Mira ...

I keep forgetting to review on this story...but I lovedon't this story! Great writing style and plot. Like how you transition from Mircana and to erlu. Great job! I'm looking forward to more of erlua that you may have in progress :)

GREAT STORY! Loved every chapter of it. You're a good writer.

I think considering the content later on you should up the rating to M as it is adult content. But other than that, good story.

I would say that this chapter IS M considering the content. But still, good job!