Reviews for The Little Lion Angel
BlackxValentine chapter 9 . 10/27/2009
Please continue this!

It is so interesting!

I like the characters and that you pretty much kept the game characters IC!

Please please don't tell me this story is abandoned! DX
BlackxValentine chapter 5 . 10/27/2009
Lol, Selphie wanting to blow something up... that's so Selphie! XP
lastat-chan chapter 9 . 7/30/2005
Nice hope to read more of it.
Hyne chapter 9 . 9/22/2004
Hey Angel! Wow, I'm so glad you updated this. I haven't been on this site in eons - honestly about a year. But I'm back now, and I really hope you continue this. Its getting adorable!

P.s. I used to be Angelwhisper. Lol, don't think you remember me, but I used to actually be devoted to this site and this fic. Heh. Take care!
RakuenKit chapter 9 . 8/6/2004
HI! I bet you thought you would never get another review in this story HU. Well I just found it I think its the best fic I have ever read and I would love it if you updataed soon but if you don't I understand but I do think that if a reviewer flamed you, don't lisen to them this is a wonderful fic and I think you should continue and thats alot comeing from me I'm big time flamer. -AngelD
Sugar-high Strawberry chapter 9 . 7/28/2004
Hey there, really awsome story. Update soon plz!
Kita1 chapter 9 . 6/28/2004
hmm... it's cute... a little confusing, who is seifer's wife? update soon
Morisatou Keiichi chapter 8 . 11/17/2003
Coolcoolcoolcoolcool!

please DO go on! But Seifer's so mean...

(as you might have garnered, i don't believe in Seifer being mean...but it goes well with you fic. His kid and Rinii are so cute together, Which is kinda odd coming from me coz i'm younger than him but oh well.)
Morisatou Keiichi chapter 6 . 11/17/2003
O_o

This is awesome!

But why is Seiferso mean...oh well, i think that Squall is gonna have some fun.
The Notorious Naurwen chapter 3 . 7/13/2003
Oh! DRAMA! lol! I like it! Keep it up!
The Notorious Naurwen chapter 2 . 7/13/2003
I liked it! _ I know this is a shameless plug, but, please read my final fantasy 8 continutaion Final FFantasy 8: Dreamers! lol! There, it's said! _
Invariance and Enlightment chapter 8 . 2/19/2003
It's a good story and your descriptions in the authors notes are very good. Just keep writing.

Peace and Love
Keiry chapter 1 . 2/18/2003
Hi! I read your story and forgot to review, oops! I love it! Its cool, no really it's cool!
Creator Smoogis chapter 1 . 2/18/2003
of all, I like the idea and the story:)

I don't really like suggesting stuff, makes me feel like I'm getting in the way of people's unique writing style, but I have a few suggestions to make the story seem ? lol, I don't wake up until the afternoon and my vocabulary is cut in half, sorry:)

Maybe you could, in the future, have a few plotless chapters before you start with the main story, so that we can meet the characters and get inside their heads. I was surprised at how quickly the kidnapping came, and the cause of it. (Kidnap for being a clutz? lol, I wouldn't want to go to that school:)).

Also, maybe feel a bit more confident with your writing. That is pretty strange, coming from me, but if you had the confidence to write it out without cringing (using the word "you", even though I'm also addressing myself:)), then it wouldnt produce a great amount of cringing-ness in the future.

Anyways, this is all coming from the person with the lowest amount of self-esteem on the planet, but the basic idea of this review is that it is a great idea, a great story, and has much potential. Looking forward to more updates in the future:)
mysterio000 chapter 5 . 12/25/2002
awwwwwwww, not much sirrin/rinii here yet! I WAN MOOOOOOORE
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