| Reviews for Birthday Gifts |
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  Guest chapter 2 . 5/15 I have to say that even though this was your first M rated fic I feel like you did an amazing job and put a lot of hard work in the plot and there was little to no spelling or grammatical errors which was a plus and the fact that you made the story long enough to enjoy and not to worry that it is about to end abruptly so congrats to you and hope you keep doing what your doing hope this was helpful in any way |
 hulkysy chapter 2 . 12/3/2019 Nice lemon here nice teasing and nice little prologue |
| Firelord67 chapter 1 . 7/8/2019 Please stop mixing japanese and english. |
| Firelord67 chapter 1 . 7/8/2019 "San" means "miss". Not what you call a close friend |
| SkeletonKnight chapter 2 . 12/13/2016 gud |
| Melonlord chapter 1 . 4/25/2016 Great job! And by the way, I really like your writing style |
| BlooEagle chapter 2 . 1/25/2016 holy mother of smut... oo I'm glowing bright red right now, I feel like a neon red tomato under a blacklight! I'm also wincing at (embarassing to admit) how tight my pants have gotten . great story! please write more?! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/4/2016 Very intense story. Very good to read. One thing though...in your next M fic try being a bit more "rough" if i can put it that way. But this was a awesome story good job |
| Georgia chapter 2 . 11/6/2015 I LOVE IT! |
| Itzmepam chapter 1 . 10/15/2015 This was great! |
| Cloudnjne chapter 2 . 8/16/2015 Finally someone wrote real world kazuto/asuna! People for get that they are a real world couple! Great stories! Loved morning after too |
| Resting Sovereign chapter 2 . 1/19/2015 You write well! I'm happy to have read this. It's certainly better than the 'bonus' chapter of Volume 1, IMO (whether Reki had intentionally written it that way or due to poor translation) Either way, I consider this as my headcanon on the more intimate side of their relationship now. Thank you for this! |
| Rebeccaseal chapter 2 . 1/17/2015 "Oi, Asuna-san, how long have you been prepared for this?" OMG LOL! I couldn't stop laughing... But really, Rika deserves a thank-you for that. |
| Rebeccaseal chapter 1 . 1/17/2015 A lunchbox! Awww! Why does Kirito have to be so darn adorable? |
| elins are very cute chapter 1 . 1/16/2015 They did have sex in canon. It's called 16.5 and it's extremely poorly written. |
