OMG an actually enjoyable Naruto story where he doesnt get OP for no reason and actually learns proper Ninjutsu. Dope!

Does naruto have the summoning contract

But why why tho

Are you dumb? That sort of fear and chlidhood trauma would easily make him go Kyuubi. I dont give a shit about friendship but there's a point where friendship dont work and you just go apeshit

Guest below that is sucking Sasuke's dick. Shut the fuck up. We get it. You were fascinated with watching your limp dick puff of a father suck cock and take it up the ass by the guy who raped your mother. If you like Sasuke because you fuck your own anus to the thoughts of him, then do so QUIETLY. No need to write bullshit you pathetic sack of shit.

went shit

Ok so I feel I should point out that kushina and minatos marriage was kept a secret and if she WAS mentioned in a book in the library it would not be as his wife unless someone was manipulating things to leave clues for Naruto

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First of all, I find it hilarious that you explained Naruto's canon personality with a mental disability. Hilarious. Seriously.
Second of all, I get that Naruto is a little drama queen and that he needs to have his moment with Sasuke. I'm just wondering why everyone is so accepting of that.
Experienced shinobi shouldn't encourage him to lie to his team mates about his abilities. That just seems dangerous.
Also continued disdain for Sasuke after wave arc where he almost died for Naruto always baffled me.

Sem querer repetir, mas por quê a Hinata?! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH! QUANDO VOU ACHAR UMA FANFIC DO EXAME CHUNIN GAARA VS NARUTO?

Eu seeeeeeei que nunca deixariam dois jinchuurikis se enfrentarem, mas no anime tudo pareceu aleatório. Teria sido incrível se eles tivessem se enfrentado na primeira rodada da terceira parte dos exames chunnin, invés de fazerem nas escondidas da segunda rodada.

Até agora a fanfic está encaminhando exatamente da maneira que eu gosto.

Eu sempre detestei a Sakura por ser totalmente inútil, após ela cortar o cabelo ainda era uma carga. Só comecei a gostar dela a partir do shippuden, infelizmente, começou a decair novamente após uma pequena melhora.
A Sakura é sempre assim, dá um passo pra frente e dois pra trás. Parece que está fazendo de propósito!

A cena gore não foi assustadora, mas estava vendo algum esforço aplicado na ultima cena. Ao todo, estavam em poucos detalhes descritivos, então não eram tão perturbadores, dá trabalho escrever todos esses detalhes. Mas, se você quer realmente fazer um desses, uma foto real ajuda muito.

Good start, aside from kakashi not being aware of Naruto's childhood. Even assuming kakashi is taking missions outside of konoha 11 months of the year, he would have checked in on Naruto at some point in that remaining month. If he is not aware than that is only due to his own negligence

U r the very first person im reviewing to continue this story.. plz